If I were Ryo I'd love Bakura (and not just because I'm actually a Fangirl). Bakura is actually helping Ryo.

Well that was…cute? Sorry but you have to admit Ryo actually getting comfort from Bakura is exceedingly cute.

Any time's a good time to destroy the world!

Holy frig...
K now Kura-kun is starting to scare me. Before, it was kinda sweet in a twisted kind of way. Now he's all possessive and scary. Im glad in a fangirl so he won't be against me ('')

Awesome for two updates in one month.
Good luck on the next chapter!

Wait... Are Tea and Tristan a couple?! EEEEEEEEEEEEEK! That level of horribleness shouldn't be allowed!

I think that this chapter is really great! keep going with this story, It is one of my favorite stories on here!

great chapter

Good story seastar529.

nice

OH MAH RAW U FINALLY UPDATED! FINALLY! this made my day it really did!
but this update has been so long from the last one that I'd forgotten what had happened in the story so far and needed to re-read one or two chapters back.

This chapter WAS short, but it was awesome and it was sweet and sad and it was enough!

this was an interesting chapter, especially the mark. Maybe it's not new, it's just darkness that was already there and showing himself. But that mark scared me. Now I'm worried about what's going to happen to Ryou. And what's going to happen between him and Bakura. Or even between Bakura and him

POOR RYOU I JUST WANNA HUG HIM! TT

Wait...does that mean that BAKURA has a similar mark of darkness on HIS back (O.O)

this fic is still epic! but...idk I REALLY liked the beginning of it and stuff. I like the whole thingy with Ryou and the fire powers and whatevers, but I liked the beginning stuff better. That part feeds my inner tendershipper, even though this fanfic isn't technically supposed to be tendershipping. can you put in more tendershipping-like stuff? pwease? u can keep going with the magic and fire thing, because it's interesting, but incorporate more of what you were doing before.

One thing about this story that always catches my attention, and is a change from the norm but it's a nice touch: you use "light" and "dark" instead of "hikari" and "yami". That's not seen often in YGO fics, and I rarely do it in mine, but when someone DOES do it, I can appreciate it, even if I like the way "yami" and "hikari" sound as opposed to what they mean in English. (Basically, English is a crappy language and Japanese sounds more beautiful XD)

GREAT CHAPTER! good luck on the next! and hopefully a speedy update!

(Wow...a REALLY long review for a REALLY short chapter.)
(I should re-read this whole story from the beginning, to get back up to speed.)

You know, Its a rare thing on fanfic to find a good story to read over and over again. I think you have it. I read this story five times today and I love this story so much because it does not revolve around ryou getting beaten up by yami bakura. Please do continue writing this story til the end. I will follow and add you as a favorite!

In a weird way,Ryou vaugely reminds me of Zuko. Maybe that's just from the fire. Anyway, keep on writing. The story's getting really interesting here.

Don't take offense to this but you remind me of my best friend when you write, I have to pester her every day and she still doesn't update when I want her too. It's fun though and I do like the whole thing but Bakura's being a bit of an ass but I can see that being the way Bakura is.

nice

WOW... what a change in Ryou... that fire cant be good. and zorc is getting closer. suspense is getting intertestingly suspenseful
that being said, nice little chapter even though it took u like two monthis to get it done (lol is fine and worht the wait)
the whole fire thing is interesting and i wonder if it will become invoved in more of teh incidents that happened to him early on in this story. and what of zorc. OH ITS SO EXCITING! but ryou really needs to check that attitude of his...
also i didnt say anything because im good at dealing with it... but the way you write has a few confusing... erm... confuzements (i kno its not a word). like the style u use... i wouldnt say its gramatically incorect, but its still confusing and seems off. maybe you should check it when you do the next chapters.
which brings me to teh end...good luck on the next chapter!