love it

*First of all, I like that constant use of the word Marvelous.
So, I loved this story (I've read it before, but I'm only reviewing now. Wait, what?) I think it was really compelling and it showed the kinder side of the Careers. I like how you came up with why certain Careers volunteer. A point system!
Now for the nit picky stuff... I apologize in advance for this
You had some grammatical mistakes, and once you spelled it TrainingAcademy without a space unless that was on purpose. Most of the grammar mistakes were just forgetting commas before conjunctions that create compound sentences. However, don't take this to heart because most of this has pristine (I love that word!) grammar, and I'm fairly certain that I have made that mistake over a thousand times. That makes me a hypocrite.

I'm crying. That was...breathtaking. Astonishing. Amazing. Beautiful. AND SO DARN CUTE!

Sad... because Marvel didn't fulfill that promise

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Okay, i don't normally read anything with Glimmer and Marvel in it, but I decided to try it since you're reading my Katniss/Peeta story, and you know what? You are such an amazing writer, that I actually liked, no, LOVED it! It was so touching that it makes me not want Peeta and Katniss to win. It makes me want Marvel to win, for Glimmer. I can't imagine how he felt when she died :( You're a great writer, never stop! You'll go far, kid!

OMG! this was so good! there weren't any slow parts and it was very creative! love it! :)