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This c/e is so good. Please do a Chapter 2 of this.

Ho my god! I'm belgian ( french language) and this story is very exiting! I want a chapter two

Loved it write more

escreva uma continuaçao por favor beijos espero que me responda

Do another chapter now plz

So Hot! Carlisle is making me so hot!

I honestly hated it. I do not think Carlisle would allow that to happen. I also don't think Esme would do that to the man she loved even if no harm was intended consitering her past life
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i love all the different ways you can spin a carlisle/esme love story. i think a little kink works well for them, especially with esme being in charge. i hope you write more as i can see you having a lot of fun with this.

Bravo this was a fabulous oneshot with loads of spice
Adored it. :)

;) My new fav c/e lemon!

Something special! BDSM equals hot with a capital 'T'! Kinky Esme and Carlisle's are rare, so this is a true diamond in the rough ;)

Very hot good job I really enjoyed it

Finally something diffrent! I loved the bDSM in this one, it was really hot and really fun! Esme and carlisle's relationship in this story is relatable, everyone has patches in their relationship but it's what you do about it that makes the diffrence. The first night was pretty funny, if my boyfriend complained about my lip gloss i'd slap him across the face! :) Do you have other stories? I would like to read them

Perfect! I love CE anything, and this was great! I'm going to read more of your stuff now :)