Are u still working on this story

Tell me your gonna finish...I LOVE this I've gotta know what happens

Umm... I'd just like to point out that one can't get 'ammonia' unless you buy it. I'm thinking you may mean 'pneumonia', which is an entirely different thing. There are a few other ouch moments as well, particularly spelling and grammar, but you do seem to manage to keep a POV. Dialogue could do with a tidy up, but on the whole, it's fine.

Spelling examples:

'Threw' should be 'through' - the first is the past tense of the noun 'throw'.
'Then' instead of 'than' - 'then' is an adverb and relates to time, and also as a consequence, so you could write: 'If you had cleaned your teeth properly, /then/ you wouldn't be in this predicament.' 'Than' is a comparison i.e. 'Russia is even more spacious /than/ Canada.'

Other than that, hope to see more.

Poor Todd! That must have felt horrible!

Poor Todd is sick...

I hope next chapter will find him feeling better.

Keep the good work going, I want to read more.

What are you going to do with Todd? You have an opportunity to reshape wraith history in a sense. Instead of returning him to his former glory. You could take the story a different direction. He obviously has a sort of attachment to Lorne, and you could reshape him to show that human's are more then just "cattle". It's Todd, but it's not Todd, he has become a toddler/child and therefore has a lot of potential to his future. You could also have him come to understand and appreciate the Atlantis expedition, even more through John, Jen, Carson, Teyla, Rodney, Radek, the members of SGA-1, all these people could be influential in shaping the new "Todd". I hope you will give it some thought about finishing the story. I really think it has a lot of potential to be really good.

Wow. Congratulations! Good luck, I'm sure you'll do great!

I also look forward to your next chapter and look forward to where you take Todd and us next!

OH MY GOSH yay! Congratulations! I hope being a parent goes well for you and brings you happiness! I do so hope you continue the story!

Congrats for your new role as a mom. It's wonderful but takes a lot of energy!

I hope you will have time to write a new chapter soon, I'll be glad to follow you again.

Can't wait to read more. :)

Whoa! When I read last chapter i wasn't expecting this!
But it's probably what would have happen... I do like Ronon, but his simple-minded hatred for all Wraith was always little let down. Not that I can say, I would expect him feel any different after being Runner for years.

Love your Lorne. He would make awesome father if it came down to it. And somehow I starting to think it will be his duty too look after Todd.

And their at stage one with Todd... just as he started to make progress in trust. Actually it somewhere beyond stage one, kind of worse that it was first time. But I like how you made Todd into child. Completly! And everyone are just as bafled by sudden change. ;)

Todd was so untodd like, but, but it was so cute and childlike! I think you got ronons personality well. But child Todd is so defenseless! He's a born killer sure, but poor Todd! I LOVE this chapter I greatly look forward to more. I think this has become my FAVORITE Todd story.

That waw...WOW!

But now I am really angry against Ronon!

I know he has every right to hate and despise the wraith, but a wraith child is still a harmless child. He could have just pull him away from Rodney, but not nearly kill him!

poor Todd...as you can tell I am real fond of him and not only he is reduced to be a powerless child, but now the satedan moron wanted to kill him!

Now tell me it is not the end! I know what it is to get writersblocks as I am myself a fanfic author, but come on...don't let us hanging out please :)

OH MY GOSH! The image of my favorite powerful wraith, in child form, bitting Rodney's knees is just hysterical! Oh poor Guide/Todd, he must be so confused.

ARE you still writing? plz hurry up.