Reviews for XS Mulan parody |
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Sally Hutchison chapter 2 . 2/5/2015 Xiaolin temple Me: 10 Clay : Hay Sally, we all want u to put the star on top of the tree. Me : [look at them then back down] No thanks. Kiniko : Sally, what's wrong? Me : Nothing. Raimundo : [pulls my chin to look at him] Come on, what's up? Me : [sighs] It's just nobody remember's It's also my birthday Today. Clay : Oops. sorry partner, we forgot. Me : What else Is new, my birthday Is always forgotten about. Kimiko : Oh...Sally. 6 mins later Ping Pong : [crawls In my lap & wipes a tear] Sister Sally...please don't cry. |
Sally Hutchinson chapter 1 . 2/5/2015 Xiaolin temple Chase: 10 Me: 5 Chase : Sally? Sally? Now where did that girl go? Sally, u may as well show yourself now, u can't sneak up on me. Me : [giggles] Watch me. Chase : [snatches me from behind] Try as u might little student, u can't sneak up on your teacher. Me : [giggles] Chase...put me down. Chase : [puts me down & took off] Let's see If you've gotten any faster, Sally! Me : Wanna see [took off after him] 5 mins later Chase : Sally! [grabs me] |
black-cherry-blossoms98 chapter 22 . 1/6/2014 I love It! mulan is one of my favourites! oh and I love the idea of the modern xiaolin! please write it! |
Guest chapter 22 . 1/6/2014 i loved it! oh please make a modern vision! |
hihi123 chapter 1 . 11/24/2013 Go with the story! I really like the idea! |
Mina Arellano chapter 22 . 11/3/2013 Yes great ending I loved it |
shainag322 chapter 22 . 11/2/2013 The Modern Xiaolin story idea you have does sound interesting. I'm looking forward to reading it |
VanillaStratos chapter 22 . 10/31/2013 Mulan has always been one of my favorite stories when i was little and i was sooooooooooooooo glad when this story came up! I think it was a really cool idea to put xiaolin showdown into the world of mulan, its really quite sad to see that it has ended:(( but i was really happy that the last chapter followed the mulan story so closely i could really picture everything happening:)) btw, will you be working on new stories now that this one has been finnished?:) |
Awkward Jess chapter 22 . 10/30/2013 I'd read that story idea you had at the end if you posted it! By the way, I love how you ended this story. :D |
HappyGirl345 chapter 20 . 10/9/2013 I cant wait 4 the update i loved mulan and xiaolin showdown as a kid i cant wait 4 the next chapter |
Layla347 chapter 20 . 9/15/2013 It was pretty funny having the guys dress as girls can't believe rai was jealous, keep on writing. |
Mina Arellano chapter 20 . 9/3/2013 This is awesome X3 I love the little fluff parts that you put in her especially when rai was jealous X3 |
Guest chapter 19 . 8/31/2013 Yay my favorite part is coming PWEASE UPDATE! |
black-angel-3 chapter 19 . 8/28/2013 That was really great ! I love it Good luck with the next chapter |
Guest chapter 16 . 8/27/2013 ohh thank you my patiens payied off lol, really enjoying it keep up the the hard work. ps i had to play a girl wort fighting while reading this XD |