I must say that I absolutely despise stories that are in the justified format. Aligning paragraphs in the center is awkward since to me, that only applies to poems.

No está mal.
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Not bad.

this story has so much potential, just let up on the italics it makes it hard to read.

Yes, shooty shoots! You must make more!

As a fan of gas masked apocalyptic badasses I demand more badassery! In exchange for bullet money.

i wonder how louise will react when she learns about their life?

This is seriously amazing. It's been a long while since I enjoyed a metro crossover, if you update again I will be there to read it immediately so please update soon, or just please reconsider updating. I hope you don't plan on lowering there killer lifestyle too much.

I'm really enjoying this and despite the large gap in time hope you continue this at some point

deberian salir mas capitulos

MORE!

Yes, rangers are killers

I really loved this story it was hilarious if you could continue it only if you wanted to it would be great!

ohh this is getting good!

Force answers to Force... SO SUCK IT YOU BLONDE WHORE! hahaha i loved this chapter. seriously great job man, i look forward to more.

yay! a fanfic about one of my MOST FAV! games. seriously i cired when bourbon died, felt chill's up my spin when traveling with khan and had fun blowing the shit out of nazi's with my pre-order auto shotty.

and D-6 is the hardest level there is, the libary was kinda scary and the new species scared me to my soul.

this is the Metro, where darkness is your friend, your gun a limb, and gas-mask inseperable.