Fantastic story!

Loved the plot. Needed tissues when poor Scorpios found out about his mom and when Astoria died.

"I'll break your neck" rather than "I'll break you're neck"

Loved it! I wish you had spelled out what happened with Draco and astoria

good story

I'm sorry, but the ending just ruined the story? The plot of this story was wonderful and you wrote it beautifully, but the one-year gap you took to finish this chapter totally shows and the story fell flatThe word 'shyly' was repeated too many times and the essence of Scorpius and Rose became lost; the way they spoke after the kiss just came off immature and I'm really saddddddd I was enjoying it so much! And is Scorpius going to go to America? Will Draco and Scorpius reconcile? What job is Scorpius even in? You kind of left a bit of plotholes...

Great story! I'm really happy I read this.

Just discovered this fic and I'm hooked! My guess is that Ron is the client.

That was a great story keep writing!

Love this!

Very original storyline, you did a great job making it flow. I read the entire story in one sitting, I couldn't stop!

NO DON'T MARRY GRANT! HE'S A D-BAG!

Okay. I think I hate you. Sorry about this horrible feeling that is directed at you, but why this ending? Okay, I know, it's bloody perfect, because even when they're both ready to move forward, and most importantly, TOGETHER, they still manage to rile each other up. And... and... Why didn't you write more about the "after"? Huh? Aggghhhhhh! I'm so frustrated!

But I guess if I'm feeling like this, it's actually good news to you, it proves your writing skills killed it and made all of us want more. At first, I didn't like Scorpius's job, and I didn't like that he and Rose didn't get along, and I didn't want to continue. But the way you write forbade me to stop. I literally couldn't delete the story that I had added to my library on my phone. And here I am now, leaving you this review.

So thank you for this nice reading moment. Really, thank you.

-DNP

This was so good! I'm surprised, because normally stories like this aren't my genre, but I was bored, so I decided to stick it out. By the third chapter, I was totally hooked. Who needs to finish their homework? Who needs sleep? Lol

I really liked the scene where Scorpius just kind of snapped and kissed her. I was so mad that Albus wasn't the client! I was kind of annoyed that it was James, but maybe that's just because I find James annoying. I'm also kind of sorry how Astoria died. That really sucked. All in all, this story was great, with wnough plot twists to keep you interested and not too many as to be confusing. Awesome job :)

Fantastic story! I loved it! I'm glad I found it now and didn't have to wait two years! ;) thanks for finishing the story!