oh, God, please, please, PLEASE finish this, add to it, something...

this is exceptional, cant wait for more.

Ah no, you can't leave this incredible bit o' writing like this! I need a resolution to this! It's too cruel to just leave it like that! Please tell me, there's still a Dark Angel Muse inside your head and it's busy typing out the third chapter to this, right this minute? :D

GAH! I hope Max does the right thing: dump the Norm and choose Alec! :D

this was exceptional. update soon.;)

Me like :D
Hope you post chapter 2 soon!

Great story. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Very nice story do far the gentleness to Alec is very good and true to character as far as I can tell. Please bring on the smut LOL!

This sounds like a very interesting start. There are so many possibilities, I can't wait to see where you take this.

I love this. Can't wait to see more.

You're a great writer. Looking foward to more.

Wow, you're going to leave us hanging with that, huh? Thanks for a little Max/Alec action. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Sizzling hot! Looking forward to Chapter 2. Thanks for posting!

Great start! The slow build of sexual tension between Max/Alec is incredible! Leave to stupid Logan to always have to be in Max's head. Hope you can update soon.