I just have a quick question for you... You have the flashbacks set for 10 years ago, but at the beginning of the chapter you say that he has been working at NCIS for 5 years, why?

please write the sequel for this story...
love it

Great job!

If I were an agent and had to deal with Abby's mood swings and demands for her addiction (Caf Pow), I'd be looking for another lab to handle forensic analyses. Seriously, she is waaaay too high maintenance.

I've always wondered where her boss is...because seriously, I've been in lots of labs and her oddities would never fly.

Love this story (Abby's quirks aside...). I like how you're handling the two different time periods. Usually it can be a bit confusing switching back and forth (for me anyway), but here it's flowing really nicely.

Ducky tells the story. Brilliant! Can't wait.
Vi

Absolutely loved your story, it litteraly had me laughing out loud! At a few points, I even almost started to cry :) can't wait for the sequel!

Love the story I could not stop reading it and laughing. LOVE IT!

OMG this is an awesome story!...I'm definitely favouriting this! :D

You had me on the edge of my seat and wanting to finish reading this! Good angst, lots of Gibbs Tony interaction, how they met was good too. And if there is something that you did really well its writing Gibbs with his memories not fully intact. Enjoyed reading this! Bye

Good fic! Enjoyed all the twists and turns. Humor was good as well as plot and everything else.

OMG! Just finished reading the story! This is the best story ever! If I could write properly I would write myself but since I know my stories would not be good, sorry for not good feedback either. The characters, the lines, the language and the story and the crime! All the best. Officially this is my favourite!
I hope you keep writing. Maybe some day there will be a published book with your name on it. I would buy it :)

lol... poor Daniel..

Kensi as an avid fan fiction reader i have to tell you how wonderful this story has been! I began reading it and then had missed reading the updates untl now, it is simply pefect. Your original ideas and plot development have been some of the best on this site!

great story I enjoyed it. Please put a complete tag on it when you're finished...easier searching that way.

They said way back a lot of seasons ago that she committed suicide, I think. She wasn't sick or anything. That's what Tony meant this season when he said she liked the escape in the movies they would watch - she was probably really depressed. Today they would have prescribed her antidepressants or something - back then, you just lived with it, or chose something really drastic, like she did.