oh. oh. oh okay. thanks for that. oh the feels. ouch. that was really good.

So she did suicide...okay

DONT YOU DARE SAY THERE WAS MISTAKES HERE (I don't intend to offend you, but goddamn, you brought me to tears you little-)

This is amazing. From the start to the end, I fell in love with it. I just- I can't comprehend even

TT I loved it, it's beautiful. 3

I freakin cried. O god why? Anywyas really liked this although a tad sad:(

Ok, you are a great writer to get to my feels this way, but why? *sob*

Jerk taxi driver, jeez.

goddammit! i can't stop crying :'(

I love it. :D

Well, thank you for making me sob like an idiot in front of my family. * APPLAUSE FOREVER*

Ugh this is brilliant. T_T yep I usually don't read stories in first person but, holy shit, this story is so good! Plus tragedy, ooohh. ZORO was like a boss and went saving people's lives, sacrificing himself in the process. Yep totally Zoro (and of course same goes with Luffy XD). This LuZo/ZoLu pairing has a lot of tragedy- or tragedy-like-themed stories that I've read and WTF, I can practically feel dark depressing aura around me now. Plus LUFFY's last words "I stayed with you." Holy shit. I'm teary-eyed right now... Luffy and Zoro are the only ones that could make me cry like this Sheesh, brilliancy of the author, all hail thee.

I love that it's direct to the point. And almost had a poetic feel to it, which for me, made a solid impact to my emotional side. Ha

Thank youuuu for this wonderful piece of art.

Aaah! So depressing. T.T
I saw a few mistakes - probably just things that you missed...
Get somebody to read it over for you and fix the few things! It would be worth it! *wipes tears.
-J

Nnngggg... *Insert nose blowing sound here and shallow hiccups* wh... w... t... th.. this was so saaaaaaaaaaddddddd! TTTT Whyyyy? Why did you do this to me? Why did I even read this? Why am I crying? WHY DID YOU KILL ZORO!?

Gosh. This was quite the emotional roller-coaster ride... I don't really like when stories are written in "I" person/first person pov/perspective or whatever it's called in english xD (damn danish thoughts!) Yet this one was really great. Honestly! I felt so sad for Luffy; I still feel effin sad DDDDD: Yeah it's just like Zoro doing shit like that, I fucking hope that family is greateful ! Poor, poor Luffy. Sunshine, awwww. That was so cute!

I love tragedies x3 actually I hate them just as much (Nnng, and I am writing one, too - wtf?)Together in death, at least. Brilliant ending, but I saw non other come Wahhh D: but they were just about to have a splendid date TTTT damn tears, go away! AWAY! Gogogogogogo!

Not an OTP pairing, but they are cute I felt like reading a sad, heart wrenching story *masochist like that xD* and this definitely did it. Now I am going to stuck up on hankerchiefs... I ran out... Le-cough.

Oh God, that was just tragic...beautiful story though. Nice work.

Omg. That was beautiful. Extremely depressing, but beautiful.