Haha! I totally fell for it! Great fic :)

Those last three chapters were utter agony. This was so fun and cute in the beginning and then became soul-rending toward the end. I'm too upset to review properly. I need to read an Esby so I can actually sleep tonight.

Ouch

Good setup. I am so looking forward to this. harry just about blew his top in there. Would have been a sight to see.

Wow this story had some ridiculous out of character actions. After Harry's experiences during the war, he would never have allowed anyone to do this without him involved. Further, you ended the story with some really significant issues that were never resolved. Had my wife done something like this to me, I would be livid. People who trust others simply do not keep them in the dark like this, especially when it is dangerous like this because you run the risk of someone uninformed doing something stupid just as Harry did when he lost focus and got caught and what Hermione did when Nigel went nuts. Her actions almost got both of them killed and that would take significant time to fix. Harry apparently trusts Hermione here but she apparently didn't reciprocate that trust. To be honest, Harry is a complete doormat for forgiving this quickly. Given the way the first chapter went, I expected him to re-enact his first dream as punishment but not even that happened. He just accepted the bullshit as if nothing at all had happened. That's not how it works in real relationships.

Stories like these always piss me off so damn much because I hate doormat men who just accept what is done to them at face value. I understand Harry has issues from his upbringing but it's clear from canon that they weren't that big of a deal. I despised the ending of this story. It went from being about a 7 out of 10 to a 3 based on these past to chapters. Way too abrupt and way too many issues unresolved.

Amazing story but if that was the ending it was disappointing

This is ending was a huge let down and Harry was OOC to the max, I mean c'mon Harry instantly forgives her for being a real selfish prick which I also think was OOC and goes back to that love of my life bull shit? I'm sorry but I really enjoyed the story till I got to these later chapters. 5/10 It went from liking Hermione to hating her /

Well I didn't think it was Ron but I definitely did NOT expect Niqel to be it :) got me dude at least me xD
Nice story overall ;)

Romance/Humor? Where?

Like the story 3 but wish there was more

1 yep I thought it was Ron. Two it should be he loved Hermione no he loves her. Love is a noun loves is a verb. Otherwise you kept my attention. Your writing needs polishing but that comes with practice keep it up.

I didn't realize that this was the final chapter. I honestly think you could get a couple more out of it. More than likely Harry and Hermione having to deal with all the hits their relationship took. I mean honestly, who can just easily forgive that much. He went through at least one month of hell. His friends turning their backs, if only in an attempt to protect him, his boss also doing the same thing. If it were any other person, guy or girl their would still be quite a bit of resentment and anger towards both the significant other and the friends.

Wow what were you drinking when writing this story or did you just finished up watching The Room movie before starting to write this story.

I believe Teddy's birthday is just a day before or few hours before the battle of Hogwarts because Lupin came and announced that he had a boy before the battle to everyone.
So there is the time of Teddy's births

Perhaps you could have added a scene where we are left without a doubt that Harry and Hermione are/got together? As it is now I'm still wondering if they are getting together or not.