Loved it! I can't believe this doesn't have like a million views yet! I absolutely loved! Such brilliant ideas! I never thought of Zombie and Human love. I thank you for opening my eyes to that world. Your one of my favorite authors! I can't wait to read more of you awesome stories! :D

It was painfully obvious that you didn't use a beta to edit this for you. When your English is too awkward, it's not cute or charming, simply incomprehensible. For the sake of the people who want to enjoy your writing (or just understand it) please have someone edit it in the future.

I really did try. I like the zombie theme. Maybe next time! :'(

That was somehow sweet and sad at the same time. Al's love for Arthur and his sadness that it ends like this.
However, I liked this story and maybe Al will become a zombie too and then they can be together...somehow?
And the muzzle were a good idea so that they could enjoy a little time together.

Ah... poor Arthur and Alfred. Such tragic love followed by sexy times... I wonder if this makes Alfred a necrophiliac now? And I wonder if Zombie Arthur will go "Hm... good for humping, I will keep this one as a pet and not eat it." ;) That is what I would do if I had a sexy Alfred pet. :)