Please continue! I love itttt!

ooooo I like the start of this! very intriguing. it's always so nice to have a good samaritan looking out for you, and racetrack fits the bill. onto the next

Just found this story and I’m very pleased with it so far! I’m loving all the ways you portray everyone and I can’t wait for you to update!

Such a great chapter! Thank you for updating! I love Jade's personality, I really like how stubborn she is and how you have really put a lot of thought into all of her characteristics. Very well written chapter! Thanks again!

Just found your story! I read all of the previous chapters almost immediately and loved them! I really like how you portray Jade and her personality. Please update soon! Thanks for the great chapter!

So glad you’re back! Love the bookkk!

This chapter was so good! Can’t wait for more!

Yes! Chapter previews would be awesome! Great chapter, I can’t wait to see Spots character more as he goes back to Brooklyn.

I cant believe you came back! I lost all hope. Thank you! I cant wait until spot and jade interact more! Keep on posting please!

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I love this story! I think I would prefer the Newsies’ dialogue to be spelled like they talk, with a New York accent. I just keep them truer to their character.

I'm not sure if you'll ever return to this story, but I just wanted to tell you that this is amazing. Your characterization is fantastic and your use of her backstory at the beginming of each chapter is wonderful. Even if you don't finish writing it, I'm glad you put this online and were able to share your passion for the newsies and writing. Thanks and I hope you find your way back to this story some time!

Please, please update. I really enjoy the way you write! It's completely different from any other Newsies fanfic I've read so far.

I know by this point the story is unlikely to ever be updated again, however, i cant help but hope and wish for you to update it!

Please please please please please write more!

Update immediately, please!