Hehehehe...I’m finally getting around to reading some of the older Five-0 stories that aren’t written by Qweb. It was a wild ride, I could feel the muse running the gamunt, that’s for sure.

And Cano. Man, I think I hate him more than most bad guys I read in stories. Kind of wanted to feed him to the Wyvern or let Mauna take a swing at him. ;)

Anywho, enjoyed the crazy ride. Might see me dropping another review here and there as I slowly claw through the hoard of stories on this site.

-Empress Akitla

This was a great story, and it was a little refreshing to Steve get amnesia instead of Danny. And with an ending like that, are you going to do more with Cano? You do such an amazing job writing these OCs (like Ramirez), and sometimes its great to have that rich background. Anyway, awesome story!

I just finished this incredible story and I can't get over how much Steve's wound is like Danny's in my story Charade. I swear I didn't copy you. You wrote everybody so well but I absolutely loved Danny in this. Just that right combo of tough and caring. How he beat Cano so badly while injured himself and then went to apologize- after never receiving anything remotely close to an apology from Cano - awesome. That last line makes me eager for another story with Cano yet anxious for Danny. Well done.

The story was too awesome! Steve's amnesia, Birthday party, Danny fight with Joe was truly superb. As I have always mentioned, u'r a fantastic writer and I'm u'r crazy fan!

How can I not have read this before?! Enjoyed your story immensely and especially loved the Steve whump. I still think that someone needs to start a chapter of SWOCD. Another great job!

Very good
Loved Danny beating up Cano. And the Dr laughing that Cano was beat up. The Dr. really doesn't like him. Steve what a thing to happen and lose so much time. Good thing Danny found him though. And he got his memory back. Love the bet Steve and Kono made. Steve so sure of himself. HAA Big mistake.
But I got a bad feeling from Cano. He's really pissed off at Danny. Wonder if he will truy to go after him.

Loved the story! Ohhh, a "good guy" who hates the 5-0 team? Sounds like fun! T

Such a good read, thoroughly enjoyed it! Yeay Danny as always :D

I am thoroughly enjoying reading all of your stories.

Thank you very much for this incredible story. I really appreciate your effort, time, fantasy and your great muse! ;o))

Another great story. I really enjoyed this one and you write all the characters so very well.

I'm really looking forward to reading the next story with Cano in it as I just know he's going to go after Danny.

I thoroughly enjoyed the story and especially the epilogue.

Rescue! Love this!

Great start.

i'm proud of danny being so magnanimous...personally, i don't think cano deserved the apology. that ending is very unsettling...now danny has an enemy...doesn't bode well for him in future stories, does it?