this is what i kinda want to see in stories i read that have gay couples they are equals and they fuck each other not one fucking the other and the other not doing it to them i want stories where if there are two gay men in a relationship that they both fuck each other so thank you if you happen to know any stories like that can you let me know because i can't re ally find any more like that

Ok,first I didn't leave my name on last review of chapter24,my apologies. This story never got much better. I had to skim so much, I don't know what happened to Rose. The only believable part was psychotic Ginny. I don't like harry/charlie... maybe that's why I couldn't get into story. The whole story felt like a first draft...too wordy. I am sorry because I know you can do much better.

This story needs some constructive criticism.: wordy, rehash of unnecessary events. Harry usually doesn't talk this much, even for AU. I had to skim this story until chapter 24. I kept at it because I know what a great author you are, but very disappointed.

I hope this isn't quite the end, yet? Harlie is one of the most intriguing OC characters I've ever read and I would love to see the "rest of the story".

Thank you for sharing this incredible story that has been just a complete joy to read!

Merry Christmas! (and a Blessed New Year!)

Your Constant Reader,
Heidi R.

It's not a bad story, but there are a lot of things that may need to be reworked.
1. Charlie's ex being so upset about his breakup that he runs to Charlie to fall on his penis?
2. Gay Harry's running off in anger, then having heterosexual penetrative sex with the nearest vagina?
3. Unplanned pregnancy in said vagina, leading to birth of Superchild?
deciding at age 7, that she was going to have sex because she can't decide whether she's a lesbian or straight?
The situations are so contrived and over the top. I know this is fiction, so anything goes, but at least make it logical.
I can't read anymore. I'm sorry, I don't wish to discourage you, but this story line just doesn't do it for me.

Hedwig is a girl just let you know about that.

The story had been moving very slowly, but that wasn't enough to drive me away. However, this chapter was so overly dramatic that I lost interest.

Rose left her sister to live as a hermit in another country because she couldn't bear to see her sister raise "her" child. Why did she donate her eggs then? That reaction makes her appear mentally unbalanced.

Then Harry's reaction was way over the top. His mother carried him, gave birth to him, and then gave her life for him. To say she wasn't his mother was ridiculous. Then his urgency about leaving immediately was outrageous. His insensitivity towards Charlie was totally out of character. I'm sorry, but this chapter was just too much for me to continue reading. Good luck.

That was lovely

This is one of the best Harry Potter ff story that continued from the books. I love this and really great work! I had some issues with Harllie growing up so soon, but other than that a really great read!

Charlie really needs to stop being so jealous!

My wedding anniversary is October 21st so that was a good weekend! LOL

Damn it Harry - when are you going to stand up for yourself and learn to say NO!

OK that's it. I'm gonna stop reading.

There is just way to much rehashing of old stuff and past lives.

Damn it Harry - you BETTER say NO!

More rehashing of old stuff - its getting boring..

You can tell me to stop reading but I keep reading for the NEW stuff.

I just dont think harry should go back to be an auror. I hope he says NO to brian.

See I knew they would have a repeat of Bill and Fleurs Wedding - death eaters or attacks of some kind!