This is an interesting dynamic you have cooked up. Could do with some editing and polishing, especially for the transition in the story; all in all, it was an enjoyable read!

¿qué coño- eres un outo bastardo. esta seccionde fics son de Ginji y ban, ggrandisimo imbecil.
"voy a tomar tu virginidad"- una puta mierda.
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nice...) hope you'll continue writing love-hate stories about ban and himiko