This is such a wonderful story. I hope you pick it up again one day

This was a great read! My second time reading it, but I’m sad to see it hasn’t been updated yet. I hope you can one day come back to this story. I need more minako and kunzite moments! Thank you for all your hard work.

Maybe it's because he's younger and so trusting, but Mini-Mamo reminds me much more of Usagi than of Mamoru.

When I first read this, I remember being irritated by how often Ryuu's parents showed up, but on my second read, I like them more. It's somewhat unrealistic for them to never have supervision, or trouble getting away from their parents, like in the original manga/anime most of the time. The flashback and Jadeite meeting Endymion/TM again are the best parts of this chapter. "Talk about sounding like a complete idiot." Well, that's just Nephrite's style ;)

OK, so I just got back into Sailor Moon again after awhile, and of course I went to check on my fave Sen/Shi fanfic, and I was at chapter 26 before I thought to check when I'd last reviewed. And . . . I can't believe I reviewed so few chapters! So I'm going back through to review.

I like getting to know Ryuu outside of the 'Jadeite' memories. His instincts change little, but he really was a person before he got the old memories back, and that just makes it more interesting. I was surprised to see Haruka show up so early, but it's just a benefit of playing with the timeline.

Man i hope you update soon one day

I love this story sooo much! I read it all over again yesterday. Still hoping for more!

It’s been a while so I’m hoping that whatever has kept you away resolves itself so that you can continue this amazing story. You have a true talent for writing and I am missing reading your work.

Just reread this again, and I really hope you eventually find the time or inspiration to finish it, its far to good to leave on an infinite hiatus.

*poking* It's been ages since this one updated! I'm still interested in the Chibi-Shitennou! Beryl's still out there, so I'm hoping real life relents or maybe interests peaks again and you can start on this again!

Thank you for this wonderful fic, it's awesome! :)

This is my second time reading this and thought I'd leave a comment this time. :) This review is for all 29 chapters that you have posted now.

I love how you save the Shitennou. When I first found SM it was in patches and the movies. I didn't know there were seasons and what not. Then, years later, I watched the first season (90's version) and really enjoyed it but I saw the guys as villains. Years after this I found the manga and fell in love with the idea that the Shitennou and Senshi were to be couples, or at least they were roughly hinted as such. This led to me finding out Naoko-sensei wanted them to be couples and they became my pairings since. Though my OTP is Helios and Chibi-usa. I also like the twisting of the plot with the Black Moon Clan. I could really see it happening with how stuck he was on Neo Queen Serenity. I also like how you have the two teams telling an adult, especially Ami's mom, like you wrote, it's good to have a doctor on your side that is mostly in the know.

I enjoy how you mesh canon that we all love with the ideas you've pulled together for the story. Personally, I enjoy learning about new cultures (I'm a big ancient culture nut and I like discovering new things in regards to cultures I feel attached to, Japan being one of those) and how you add just bits about the culture like Naoko-sensei did with the manga is great.

The start is slow and that isn't bad, however, you do have to think, "Is this scene needed? Does it push the story forward or can its message be told some where else, some where better?" There are also some grammatical errors, just keep watch when you go back and edit. Try reading the chapter or part out loud, you'll be able to hear where things sound wrong or need to be rewritten all together. I've also noticed that you divide paragraphs into two when they could - or should - be one. Just remember (at least this is how I can) that a paragraph, like a scene, talks about one subject before a break is needed. If you need an example just let me know.

I also have an idea for a "retelling" of the first season of SM. I just need to make things concrete before I can start it so I commend you on getting yours out there. :)

me quede con la inquietud, actualiza por favor. me encanta tu historia

Please update, plase!

cool story

It's been a few months so I hope this means a stellar update is on its way. :)
Every chapter you bring just raises the excitement. Your depiction of each character is well written. I can see them like Naoko would have written them.
Please update soon... I can't wait to read more.