Awww! Poor III! XD I'm sorry, but IV did kinda deserve to get kicked back lol. Very cute, was smiling/snickering the entire time reading this.

Hahaha! Oh my gosh I nearly cried xD In a laughy way of course. This was great, I can totally see the two acting like this, it seems so realistic! Awesome stuff, I normally don't like short one shots but this is perfect x3 As someone else already said in the reviews, don't stop looking at that fanart anytime soon though! But I know what you mean about getting all of the inspiration from it :P

I think the best part of this is that they're doing the exact same crap that bratty teenaged brothers would do to each other, and damn, there's never enough of that with these two. Especially because III struck him right back, and it stands to reason he totally would.

If fanart produces stuff like this, no, you must never stop looking at it! D

Omg, I can see "second intentions" in it xD
Anyway, cute! :]
Keep writing! o/

Hahaha! Little IV is such naughty boy! He shouldn't be mean to his baby brother brother like that!

I'm just, like, laughing at IV and III right now!