For all of his many incarnations on TV, the doctor never had crossed boundaries with his female companions. This story is problematic.

Very true Dr Song, very true... nice little one-shot, I liked it.

Yes!

oh poor Doctor. So naive - Will he ever learn?

Thank you for existing. I'll be presently reading every single story you've ever written because they're just such powerful little vignettes into their lives. It feels like I opened the door to the TARDIS and I had to duck out due to pressing matters or something. They're just very true to character and intimate and wonderful. Thank you thank you thank you.

That was...hot.

I really love the bit about her lives flowing through his veins (: That was good. And this was very in character.

Love it, The doctor and Rivver are so funny together. : )

As she'd so succinctly putitduring one such argument, "Those are my lives running through your veins, I have every right to protect them."
-Loved this line

Nice interlude.

A bit different from your typical fic, but I have to say you captured both characters very well.

*gasp* river you naughty girl. Lol nice one.