| Reviews for Burning Alive |
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   Deathclaw2010 chapter 2 . 6/29/2015 Um... No... No, that wasn't an internal monologue. That was the narrator describing everything flame princess was thinking or feeling without direct input from the character herself. |
| shadow-dog18 chapter 7 . 4/26/2013 aww i just love those together 3 |
| Glenn Leider chapter 7 . 4/15/2013 I am a bit disappointed, but hope what you write in the future will make for what you have deleted. |
| Glenn Leider chapter 9 . 4/10/2013 Interesting fanfic. Looks like you stuck just to Season 4. The best parts were: (1) What happened between the end of "Hot to the Touch" and the start of "Burning Low." (2) The end of "Burning Low" showing the great detail of Finn's desparate search for Flame Princess after Jake cut off her oxygen supply, putting her fire out. I look forward to your Season 5 sequel. |
| TheJamjam chapter 9 . 4/10/2013 Why did you just recite Ignition Point? Uh.. |
| Gold Testament chapter 6 . 3/12/2013 At least you're doing what they never do. |
| Gold Testament chapter 4 . 3/12/2013 I hate Tree Witch... She caused princesses except PB to like Finn more, and even had him shave his blonde locks just so she could have hair. |
| Gold Testament chapter 3 . 3/12/2013 When I was a kid I had a dream about jumping into a pool of Marshmellows, but I also once had a dream about being eaten by a giant Marshmellow. |
| Gold Testament chapter 2 . 3/12/2013 Actually I like where this is going...Of course I like a few FinnXFP stories because they continue to show the relationship. |
| Mr.nin10do chapter 7 . 3/11/2013 Jake u troller |
| Skullkittenz the Reaper chapter 5 . 3/2/2013 Burning low? Really? This just got more interesting... |
| Don't gve a crappppp chapter 6 . 11/18/2012 they better get into more depth with flame princess |
| 00SparkAchu00 chapter 6 . 10/13/2012 The press release of season five (November :D) said that some of the plots playing out in 2013 are "the possible redemption of Finn's crush Flame Princess and the birth of Jake and Ranicorn’s pups." Hopefully that means that Flame Princess is finally going to have a decent character development this season. Awesome work, it was perfect! So I guess, see ya in 2013! |
| frustrated456 chapter 5 . 10/10/2012 They need to make more FP episodes so you can write more! Nyaa I need to read more so badly! |
| 00SparkAchu00 chapter 5 . 10/8/2012 This was like the best scene, spoilered at the Comic-con yeah, but still one of the best parts of the episode :3 Can't wait to see the next part! I'm sorry to hear that you'll be waiting until Flame Princess makes another appereance, that will surely take a long while. I'd say that you could go creative and stuff but since you pointed that this isn't your style and it's really hard for you to write Adventure Time, I won't bother you. Take your time and keep the good work :) |
