hope you update soon, I was kind of thinking Matt would have the obsession over Val not Allison with how they went to winter formal and actually seem to have some form of relationship with one another. again hope you update love your little mini series on this so far.

really wish this was still been updated

Please update soon I love this story and I'm eagerly waiting for your return.

More please

Good so far, but where's the uodate? It's been a month!

this is so good,omfgosh I cant...I need an update or I might cry.
please update soon ;-;

You should definitely do a smutty chapter for that scene! I'm all for it.

Great chapter! Please update soon :)

Haha, "long and hard" I see what you did there! XD Anyways, yeah go for it, I'm a Tumblrite so I'm definitely used to smut and lemon related stuff – not that I purposely look for that kinda stuff, you know how Tumblr can be. (0_) Honestly I think a rated-M chapter would be just fine, it would actually be nice to see what went down that night... and up and back down, oh my God, I have a dirty mind, but compared to everyone else I'm an angel that discovered bad stuff, kinda like Castiel! XD Good luck! (_)-b

I would love that!

Yes a smut chapter

YES

I think you should write that chapter about what went down with Derek and Valerie. Love the story! Super excited for more.

Haha, the way Valerie described Mrs. Argent popping in out of nowhere made me think of like Valerie grabbing an unopened box of cereal and Victoria just poking her head out with that evil, wide-eyed stare! XD I hope Valerie's dad catches that son of a bitch, people like that need to be helped or put away if they get too violent or endanger others, and what he did to Valerie was nowhere near right! The scene with Allison and Valerie was nice, its nice to have friends you can talk to about anything. Ooh, if Stiles and Valerie are "dating" they should never get into arguments, that can be the death of a relationship. :P That was so nice what she said about Scott, he really is the brother everyone wish they had. My gosh Derek really knows how to get himself out of trouble, but he should know his girlfriend is smarter than that. I never could understand why Derek just jumps right over to killing people, like he should trust Scott, he's been right so far! Oh, you know besides doing 3rd person, there's also switching from one character to another, I did that for my FanFic and its really fun speaking through different characters at a time, especially Stiles, Jackson, and Lydia 'cause you go from like sarcasm to douchiness and then to sassy, its awesome; but yeah 3rd person I feel like you can get more into depth of every ones thoughts. Great chapter I can't wait for the next one! (_)-b

Great chapter!

Finally caught up on both of your stories! Love them both!