Great chapter as always and I really wish you hadn’t stopped here. :( Still this story was great.

This story is great. Love it and the amazing characters.

Love the story keep up the good work and congrats for almost completing collage and getting married.

woah... this made me cry. i dont remember the last time that happened. guess that just shows how good this is. 10/10

Change to m. Makes it mor interesting

Great as always

I like the story so for, and I like how you made your own little alternate noble six Master Chief.

Ok this story is way too damn confusing it would be much easier if toy could learn to write a story in sequential order rather than jump around the timeline like a fucking frog. Make it more defined and concise don't just jump around. I'm afraid I can't continue until this is fixed. My ADD won't allow it.

I KNOW HE'S THE ROOKIE HE'S GOT TOO BE TOO MUCH COINCIDENSE.

no offence but I hatested these types of beginnings. Just start it out normally with the story and make the character as you go. You ruin the immersiveness doing it this way it is very jarring.

Congrats, Bruh. Just read this fic with two hours straight, and I have to say you are only second to one other I have seen on this site. keep up the awesomeness.

Yeah you're back! I had forgotten about this one but went over it again and still love it. Great chapter and cliff hanger!

Meh this sucks really hard verry overpowerd 6. Nothing really good in this

Hard corpse? No, something else.
Flight of the Valkyries by Wilhelm Richard Wagner. Splendid! Shall we proceed?

I love it all ready. You present six as a complete badass something that is rarely done. In a way he reminds me of my Noble Six. I hope you receive more reviews.