Reviews for The Hiding Place
myaenadgal chapter 5 . 10/5/2014
Just writing to express how incredibly beautiful this story is. Your writer's voice is lyrical and reaches just the right level of stream-of-consciousness to express the emotions you portray so well.
QueenSeer161 chapter 5 . 6/23/2013
Seriously, this story is beautifully written. It doesn't strike me as fanfiction at all because your voice is so strong throughout. I don't read it as a Klaine story. I'm reading it like a story with characters I don't already know. I want to know more about them because my brain just won't let me fill in any holes with canon. And trust me, that's meant as a very high compliment! I want to know more about your characters, and I think you do such an amazing job of picking out just enough information to give the reader.

A perfect example: "There was a coffee stained napkin, an ash tray full of cigarette butts, and three large stacks of papers that Blaine had made me promise not to touch scattered across the kitchen counter." There is so much in that sentence. I can even see the back-story of Blaine telling Kurt "seriously, do not touch these!" And Kurt being amused and Blaine breaking out into a grin despite himself. "I'm serious!" he'd say, and Kurt would quip back sarcastically, "Right, I can tell." And then Blaine would roll his eyes and they would kiss quickly before Blaine would go back to doing something else. I saw all of that in a flash and laughed to myself when reading that sentence. I smelled the coffee and stale cigarette smoke. It's all there, in one sentence. And you chose it so perfectly.

Some writers don't give enough details, and others really do bury the reader in so many details that you completely lose the point they were trying to make. You struck the balance, and I don't know if it's conscious or not, but just keep doing whatever you're doing. 3
Guest chapter 5 . 4/18/2013
What a beautiful story, I found it through the recommendations of themuse 19 whose current story I'm enjoying. I love your writing style, so emotional and focusing on what's really important. I like the characterisation's and AU you created. Thank you for sharing this, Nic
Mara chapter 5 . 3/9/2013
This is a beautiful and well rounded fic. Even from Kurt's perspective you are able to get, to understand and be part of blaine feelings. It is a wonderful job, I'm happy I read it.
I do not know if you'll ever see this review, but if you do i wanted to make sure you were proud of your story because it felt like wave of fire and I'm pretty sure that's one of the points of writing.
Separate Entity chapter 5 . 3/5/2013
This is wonderful.
Separate Entity chapter 3 . 3/5/2013
I love this story.
Guest chapter 5 . 9/16/2012
Such a beautiful story. I love how atypical Kurt and Blaine's relationship is. I am glad that despite how broken they both were, they took a chance and found happiness.
kurtisawesome chapter 5 . 8/26/2012
That was a really beautiful story. I think you have a way with words.
Siry.Pop chapter 5 . 8/26/2012
I have found perfection. Really. this is one of those times that i said to myself why I cannot draw?! this fic really deserve a fanart some of the scenes you wrote are simple amazing.
thank you so much for this amazing fic :D
JustFindTheHorizon chapter 5 . 8/20/2012
I'm really impressed by your writing! This is a beautiful story
dtslovesya chapter 5 . 8/20/2012
Hey, I really love your story. So much emotion and depth that many authors can't even put into 20 chapters. You did it in five. Though I am sad it ended, the words play through my mind repeatedly. Your writing is admirable and am glad I had a chance to read it. I am now following you in hopes to read some more from you in the future.
Kurtstalker chapter 5 . 8/19/2012
A lovely story, beautifully told.
claudiavonberckefeldt chapter 5 . 8/19/2012
Hi, I read this because themuse19 recommended this fix. I do not regret it! I loved the different style of writing, pov and setting. Great job!
HummelK chapter 5 . 8/11/2012
(Thats my penname up there)
This was such an amazing piece, it was very enjoyable. You are a wonderful author.

This story is so beautifully written, because of all the emotion you placed into the writing.

Many emotions struck me as I read, sadness, happiness, nervousness, and despair; I felt like I was Kurt.

Wonderful story,
HummelK
N.E.P.tunes.out chapter 5 . 8/12/2012
Oops. Hit follow instead of favorite...
Anyway! This story. I don't even know what to say. I think what I liked about it best was the writing itself, your style. It had depth and finesse. The narration was muted but tangible. I hope I'm making sense. It wasn't the characterization that won me over or even the tale itself, but the way it was told. Mechanically speaking, I didn't notice any errors, grammatical or spelling (not that I was on the lookout, but there weren't any distracting enough for me to take notice). I honestly wish I had more to say because there are a plethora of things I could analyze and a lot that can be said, but I'm on my phone and I can't run though each chapter to come up with something as thorough as you deserve. But I can say that I bought into Blaine being a professional talented writer with the glimpse you gave us and that was something that you wrote. You definitely have talent. You have a way with words and a voice and I quite enjoyed reading your piece and the high quality of it. It was a definite treat.
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