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   Mbreslin chapter 14 . 2/3 I couldn't find this on AO3. I want to continue reading. Please send me a link to use if you can |
| Dawn Nightshade chapter 13 . 1/1/2019 Please update or adopt out this story |
| Aizen Sosuke-Sama chapter 11 . 1/20/2017 good so far but spelling errors |
| nayukiamnesia chapter 13 . 2/19/2016 can't wait for the next chapter your story is really cute~ haha awww the cross dressing i use to do it when i was little but i couldn't pull it off to girly i geuss oh well! |
| Cats and Anime Things Alike chapter 10 . 6/4/2015 Please write more I love this story! |
| Zyren Kanda chapter 13 . 4/21/2015 Ok I have to admit I like this story, but there are so many spelling errors that I started to twitch. I just wanted to fix them all ya know, but I wanted to tell you so you could fix them or you could get a beta to fix them for you. |
| AiMila chapter 13 . 4/21/2015 very nice chapter |
| Yuuki21 chapter 13 . 4/19/2015 Hello! You're welcome Sorry for the doble comments , I didn't see the review that I posted even one hour later and it was very unusual. Good and funny chapter! Nooooo, don't go to meet Lavi ! There will be problems ! However, you have to check better the spelling/orthography of yours chapter or engage a beta-reader because sometimes ( and above all for the non-english persons like me ) it really has no signification and we don't understand well what you are talking about... See you next time. Y21. |
| Devil ichigo chapter 13 . 4/18/2015 Aww that was cute. Sheril and tyki will definitely kill Lavi if they found out he was on a date with would torture him. Please update soon! |
| Yuuki21 chapter 12 . 4/12/2015 Hello! Love your story! So original ! I'm so happy that allen just have to dress like a girl when he is outside: I 'm so tired of the story where allen happens to be a girl instead of a boy. It was maybe a great idea at the beginning but it was used too many time! I want to know what will happen next ! I just wan to see cute and romantic moment with tyki and allen ! Waiting for your next update Y21 |
| Yuuki21 chapter 12 . 4/12/2015 love your story! It has a very original plot and it change from the tendancy to say allen is a girl ! It's really pleasing that allen have to dress like a girl while he stays a boy! It's so annoying that every history which are'nt finish about the pokerpair is nearly always with allen as a girl ! I love the way you introduce the feelings of tyki and the other noah I'm very curious to know how he fell for allen at the beginning And I hope allen will stay with the noah. Will we have cute and romantice moments between tyki and allen in the next chapter? Waiting for your next update! ( sorry for the english, I'm French) Y21 |
| AiMila chapter 7 . 2/21/2015 Dont get me wrong i love the story and all but it looks like u need serious help in the grammar. Im willing to be ur Beta if u want. It will get u more readers and followers if they understand better what u wrote |
| Guest chapter 11 . 10/15/2014 This is a great story, but I really recommend you either proofread and/or get a beta reader. Even in this chapter there are places where you are either missing words or have used the wrong word and it really jars the flow of the story when the reader has to stop and work out what word you actually intended to have in place. |
| TOOLAZYTOLOGIN chapter 10 . 2/17/2014 MORE CHAPTERS PLEASE! UPDATE SUPER SOON! |
| Ciega Chica chapter 10 . 1/8/2014 This is a great story; I just can't get enough of poker pair. Keep up the good work! :) |
