This story is amazing I love it

I'm not a huge fan of romance, but overall the story was great. Nice job!

Simply incredible. I'm speechless.

I love all of the Merlin whump in this story and Arthur realizing how much of an idiot he is being. Merlin and Iyla are so cute together, I can't help but smile. Thank you for the story!

Excellent! Iyla is a very nice girl. And Merlin is Merlin.

Great story! I am moving over to the sequel now. :)

Nice Tangled reference. :)

Well, this was a lovely ending to a rather harrowing tale. Not what I was expecting when I read the summary, although to be honest it fits perfectly! Well done on writing this story so well and sticking with it to the end :)

Oh my gods amazing story, beautifully written and engaging throughout xx

Loving this

That's the great thing about dreams. Once you achieve it, you get to go find a new one.
That's the quote. It's from tangled. Great chapter by the way.

Oh. Ma. Gosh. I loved this chapter. And it was realistic if you think about how much Merlin's been through.

Really really good. Loved this. I love Iyla and Merlin together. Nice ending for this chapter too.

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