This is just sad. Nice work.

I shed tears for this becuse it is utterly beautiful and touching. Why dont you have more reviews and likes man! Gosh youre great!

Very well written and a really interesting take on why Kakashi started with the mask. Very believable. Nice job!

Nicely written.

One of the most interesting takes on why Kakashi wears a mask, and little Kakashi is a cutie :) Super One-shot, moram priznati. Samo tako dalje! :D

Kakashi was my first favourite character too. :)

Very nice. I love Sakumo fics. Well done.

Beautiful story, and very, very well written. Well done. : )

-Caliko

A good story. I like the really realistic depiction of the comic book. It sounds like something that could actually be a gripping comic. Also, Kakashi is a sympathetic character in this story, which I like. Some people make him out to be too dysfunctional and dark instead of an understandably hurting person.

wow awsome story so simple and yet deep!

Great concept. There are indeed a fair few practical uses for a mask especially when you're a warrior. And Sakumo's story is one that's largely unexplored. Poor guy had it bad. Oh the injustice! But you didn't touch on that and instead went for something trickier which is delving into a child's mind dealing with a parent's suicide. Very dark and a convincing origin. Kudos!

All those awesome origin stories from comic books I used to read immediately came to mind, Mali-how very cool!

This is so good. :)

Clicked on this by chance. It's short but powerful. Your sentences flow very nicely and the story flows nicely even with the page breaks. I look forward to reading more of your work! :)