Me likes, keep it up sugar... Please update soon... Btw, I'm not very fond of Kenshin being a little slow, is he going to get cooler in the end liek he is in the manga/anime? Tho I do like how Karou is all independent and just kicks! :)

Pheew! For a second there i thought that you were going to make Barra turn evil! That would really suck 'cause he's my favorite character. One question though...HOW DID HE DO THAT?

That was an interesting chapter...Wow Barra sure can be quite feroucious. Oh well I still like him in a wierd way still. Please continue soon!

Noooooooo...I didnt mean it in THAT way ::blushes:: I just wanted to know if you were going to tell us how Kaoru became barras master! well anyway...great chapter...and BAD barra! ::giggles:: I still like him though

Update soon!

Well... interesting... Not what I expected but cool. Is Kaoru gonna punish Barra? Was he just pretending to like her? Does he have split personalities? I shall just have to find out, won't I? Please continue!

ewewewewewew...barra's gross!...all slimy and ucky when he's himself...hahaha...kenshin no baka...aw well...he didn't know...anyway...keep it up!..

Barra is so COOL! Oh, and arigatou for giving some insight into Kaoru's father. About that guy who told Kaoru what happened, does he have anything to do with this? It seems wierd that he was left alone despite his explanation. Anywho, write more soon!

I like the story so far... I generally don't like needless use of Japanese expressions when the English works just fine, *but if you insist* on doing it, let me offer one tip. In one passage, you have Kaoru yelling, "Iie!" to mean "No! [don't do it]". "Iie" is used to mean "no" in response to a question. However, if you want it to mean "Don't do it!", the proper expression would be "Dame!" (pronounced: Da-Meh)

LOVE IT! At first its hilarious...and yay Barra is safe! You should write more about how Barra and Kaoru got together!...and Kenshin without a top...::grins::...update soon!

ur last chapter was great!keep up the good work! aite l8z

yay!...everyone's alright...how'd barra carry that LARGE and HEAVY bag?...wait hang on...he's a superstrengthed cat wasn't he?...or whatever right?...oooooh kay...nevermind then...keep it up!

Yay! Another chapter! Aw... you figured me out. I'm only reading this because of Barra. I don't know how you sneaky writers do it. No really, I love the story, adn would still think it is cool even if Barra wasn't in it (though he makes it even more superb). I think it would be cool if you dedicated a chapter or more to Barra. A change of perspective. It'd be sweet. Please continue!

That was a very good chapter. I like it alot because they got to talk a little more and Kenshin got to know a little of Kaoru's past. Your doin great and please update soon! (panties...nice touch -)

Yay! Kaoru and Kenshin parts. I truly don't know how you're gonna solve the Kaoru/Kenshin and Tomoe/Kenshin couples (who's gonna get who), but I love the little sappy parts. And if Kenshin and Tomoe are together in the end, then that's fine too, b/c the actual story is just too good to not like, b/c of a couple I don't care for as much (I hope what I said makes sense). Please continue! (Oh, and don't worry about spelling errors. If there were any I didn't notice them. I've read much worse and I could care less.)

Hey good story so far. This story is really really cute and I like it alot expecially the last two chapters. Keep it up and update soon!

(the spelling mistakes aren't that big of a deal so don't worry about it...well thats what i think anyway :)