omg this was so awesomely written! I love yu!

Omg, that was AWESOME!
My heart was pounding.
I haven't read an MK fic that good in a really long time. :)

Amazing. I'll still in shock and this is the day after I read your story! This is why people like me read every fanfic: in hopes we'll stumble across a masterpiece like this one. I loved all of it. I think that the ending was a little weaker than the whole story overall, but it still managed to come of as wonderful. Even with the R rated material, I think that it might have been able to pass for a PG-13. Anyway, this is a *great* story! Keep up the good work!

They are looking at you because this story goes pretty deep. not the EXTREMELY-emotional-make-you-gawk-with-aw-for-the-next-month kind of deep but deeper than most of the whimsical so-called dramas in this site! - excellant job! I applaud you!

That was... I really can't think of words to describe it. You have more talent than most of the writers at put together, although I suppose that relly isn't saying much anymore. Your Yu is... more in character than any other writers version I've seen (again I know that isn't saying much) and I am in awe at your ability to take the most unknown character in the show and make him a person, who despite being quite diffrent than a lot of people, still feels and hurts and loves and... have I mentioned how amazing you are yet? The only other authors who could be considered in your leage are radishface, Khirsah, and maybe Rhysenn. Please write more Yu!

Wow. Not what I expected, but great anyway. Wish I had more to say, but the rest is silence...

DUDE! *bounce, bounce* That was great ! God I love psychopaths and MK is rich with them! There's Hiead-sama and now Yu-sama! I can't wait to see more them if there is. Yu is really cool. and this is a tripefull review but oh well.

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What to say? Lovely piece. poor Yu and Kazuhi, what a thing to live with! As usual, it was as great as your other master pieces! I love this one because it's so Yu centered. Poor Yu needs more fandom! I think your right on the ball about his relationship with Kazuhi. I personally never viewed them as an incest relationship, but there was always more to their relationship. Something deeper.

Well, ja ne!

*KLD

I dont like to review anymore... I feel I'm saying the same things over and over. Saying things so much kinda make the words lose their meaning. And when my words lose meaning, I do, too.

But for this fic, I feel I *owe* you a review. This was very creative. No one cares to write so in depth about characters like this (they're all so busy with the romance and petty angst), but you do, and you pull it off amazingly well.

Okay. I'm going to stop before I start getting redundant. Thank you for writing this, it was a pleasure to read.

~Aurani

I am astounded at this work of art—Kay-san, I know I loved you before, but this just makes me love you more! _~ Your way of telling the story is both unique and refreshing—the tale itself a masterpiece. It’s somewhat reminiscent of a Van Gough painting—dark, depressing, raw…but undeniably brilliant in all its morose perfection and grotesque glory. The scenes are strung together in a most unexpected fashion, each new piece abrupt and surprising, but, somehow, it all seems to go together, flowing and mesmerizing as it enchants us with its lovely demented splendor. I wish I could find a way to adequately express my awe and appreciation for your work, but I find my breath has been taken away at the sheer brilliance of this marvelous story, your superb grasp of rhetoric, and your extraordinary writing ability. I am truly left without words—and that doesn’t happen often, so you should probably enjoy it while you can, ne? _~ #reverts back to full-on gush mode while staring at screen in wonderment# Jesus, this story really helps to illustrate why your one of the Goddesses of (the better aspects of) the MK Fanon Universe. Well, in addition, of course, to all the other millions of nifty things you do that bring joy to the hearts of all the MK fans, aka us, your loyal minions/disciples/fangirls (and fanboys—Tony would be upset if we didn’t mention the few of his kind as well). - Damn, but this story does rock! Would a huggle be too terribly inappropriate now? #huggles Kay-san happily, without waiting for a response to her inquiry from Kay, who now looks quite frightened of this psycho reviewer# _~ - Bye for now!

Kay...Kay...Kay...*shakes head disbelievingly* Once again...*looks thoughtful*

Say, do YOU believe in reincarnation? Were you like...Shakespeare in a past life or something? Maybe if that was the answer, it would make me feel better...'cause I'm sure you know by now that you're the only person who manages to make me feel envious and wowed all in the same breath. Out of all the novels I've read, all the movies I've watched, all the stories that I've written, only your own stories have ever managed to create an aura of...perfection...that others so strive to achieve. If practice makes perfect, you must have been writing from the moment you were born.

Alas...I fear I'm gushing...I tend to do that whenever confronted with a Kayfic...it's becoming a rather...frightening habit, isn't it? But then, I can only hope that one day I'll be half as good as you, because even that would be vastly above the talent of mortals.

...say...when's the novel coming out? *laughs weakly*

Of all the stories...

*wanders away*

Cheers, naa?

Rorie

Kay-san...oh my...I think this was one of the best Yu fics I've ever read- no. This WAS the BEST fic about Yu I read. EVER.

I think that part with: "Stop, Rewind..." was so good, I could imagine it as if it were on a TV screen, really. The story has a lot of realism in it, and angstiness just to fill my hunger for the dark and mysterious fictions.

Yu's point of view on everything was very realistic and I wish you could write more of Yu fics. Yu is one of the character, who is very hard to undertstand and to write about. Even Hiead is not that complex. I mean: Yu doesn't talk at all, so how are we supposed to know everything about him? I mean Zero - is an open book, Erts, is an open book - more or less we know his character, but Yu...wel, that's a very complex character.

I was wondering if you could try out some Zero-Ikhny idea, you wrote one before (a little Ikhny piece), I was wondering if you could extend you idea more. I would love to read some of it, because you are such an amazing writer.

-Olya

*sputters incoherencies at the sudden loss of knowledge of the English language* It's…beyond awesome…wonderful…breathtaking…and a wonderful use of words that left me literally breathless. It's a can't-put-it-down. *applause*

kyra-san is so lucky to get such a nice present :D

the plot was intrudging (sorry for my bad spelling), and it fits right into the story profile of Yu with a nice *click* (what i meant here was that it explained about the half killed instructor thing).

and the best thing was...Yu is my favorite character. the creepier, more silent, the better. (that is, with the exception of hiead because even i have my limits on the creepy factor)

Yu is my favorite character, and I think you're probably the only person I've seen yet who can write him (and Kazuhi) in character. ::gasping for breath:: Wow. That's amazing. Simply amazing.