Updated this story damn you it been 3 years

Probably one of the best ATLA X FMAB crossover I’ve ever seen. You haven’t updated for three years it seems, which is unfortunate but thank you for writing this so I could enjoy in 2020. 3

I've read this whole thing, but I'm reviewing on this chapter specifically because I cannot get over how wonderful this format is. I love, absolutely love, the way this chapter is organized. I keep coming back to it. I just want you to know how refreshing it is.
As far as everything else? Wow. I've read a couple of your other works, and between those and this, you have a wonderful handle on crafting a narrative. Your ability to switch back and forth between thoughts and speech seamlessly is fantastic, and the way you break up action with characters' thoughts keeps the scenes moving quickly. I'm always on the edge of my seat.
Your characterization is great. I love the way you've handled Ed and Aang's dynamic in particular, and how both alchemists never quite break from their military background.
I really hope to see more of this! Thanks for such a great story!

This story is absolutely INCREDIBLE! I was hooked from the very first sentence and read the whole thing in one go. I love how you introduced the characters and how they interacted with each other. Mustang's concern for Ed was awesome to read, and I laughed so hard at all the weird situations Ed found himself in. I love how both Ed and Mustang managed to escape Azula and now she's hounding after them. The two State Alchemists' reactions to Appa was hilarious! Mustang protecting Ed was fantastic. I loved the interactions between Ed, Mustang, and the gang. I really enjoyed reading this story, and I hope you can finish it someday!

Rest In Peace Intersecting Points. You will be missed.

Yupiii

Please update

I'm really hoping I'll get to read more of this at some point. I love it! Keep up the good work!

Please don't let this story die

*Fart*
Uh oh
Stinky
Poop
Ahahahahahaha
Poopies
Funny poopies
Elelelele
Haha
Funny poop, poop funny
Wheee
Haha
Yay for poopie
Good poopie
Poopie funny
Hahahahahahaha
Poop poop poop poop poop poop poop, funny
Yay
Fun fun poop!
Tee, hee, hee
Poop poopie, yay
Poop make me happy, happy, happy
Yahahahahaha
Uh oh
I think I made a poopie
Poop in pants, no diaper, that's funny!
Hahahahahahahahaha
Oopsie, poopy underwear now
Hee heehee
We want poopies
We want poopies
Hahahahahahahah
Hahahahahahahahahaha
Hahahaha
Poohoohoo-ah *cough*
Poop

NOOOOOOOOOOO!
Anyway, I love this story and can’t wait to see more :3

This is an amazing story! Omg I need more, I know it's been 2 years...but I'll continue clinging on to the hope that you'll update. Only 3 chapters left. I need Ed and Roy to hug, please I love parental Roy and I need them to hug PLEASE!

I guess I made it to the end of part 1. Tbh almost every character was just a stupider and/or more annoying version of who they were in the source material lol. Half joking but I don't want to be too hard on this one. I didn't hate it. But all the same, for as long as the chapters are, the story rarely feels like it's going anywhere. I didn't hate the story but I did find it progressively worse the longer I read.

I felt like the dialogue was... Above average by fanfiction standards. Everyone does have a mostly distinct voice. Each chapter ended in a way that left me wanting more. There's just no real hook. No drive to keep me going, passed cheap moments like "oh they found Mustang, what will he have to say?"

With a 2 year lull since the last update, I have little hope for a conclusion to this story so I might as well quit now rather than continue on to part 2. Peace.

You know, for a writer who says they can't write romance, you're actually doing it very well.

OK SO HOLY SHIT this was beautiful. I spent all day just reading this. I adore it. From the interactions to the plot to the dialouge, it's wonderful. I was on the edge of my seat the whole time, and when I had to stop and go do something, I just wanted to come back to read more LOL. Also. I do realize it's been two years. But holy shit wHAT A CLIFFHANGER. BUD. BUDDY. PLS. AHHH. IM GONNA DIE.