so great
pls update!

Wow. I never expected this story to get THIS good! Please continue and add more chapters! (Preferably sooner too!)
:)

Omg
I have a substitute teacher named Mrs. Ritter
And my principal is named Mr. Williams
What the heck
And well my principal is my next door neighbor the secretary lives up the street, the vice principal is my next door neighbor, the retired secretary lives up the street, around the corner are two art teachers, and an retired 1st grade aide.
But enough about my neighborhood I got wayyyy off topic. BUT the Mr Williams and Miss Ritter thing. Is cool though

PLEASE MORE!

Daaaaammmnnnn

... why didn't they call an ambulance and rush him to the emergency room

This is possibly the best fanfiction I have ever read. It's so good please update!

This is amazing :)

Good job keep it up'

triggered because this is a really hecking good fanfic but it hasnt been updated in 5 years :( hate when that happens. lol

If you're not going to continue this, I'd be happy to adopt it. I have an account, and don't say you're not getting these alerts, because I know you are!

This is a really great story with a lot of potential, and just to drop off the face of the Earth for five years is really frustrating to some readers. I'm just saying, when you commit to something, you need to finish it.

...Lady or dude, you haven't updated this since 2012. I NEED MY FANFICTION.

I loved the ending!

I am intrigued. ;-;

Woah
Intense