I found 'Fifty Shades' a good read in that it was an escape. In real life I'm a very strong and independent woman and find myself only willing to give over control completely in temporary escapades behind closed doors. I love how you show that being controlling isn't love. I am going to check out some of your BDSM works as well as 'Accidental Slave'. It worries me the message that young girls are getting today. I think we could use more works similar to yours that show girls 1) that men like your 'Christian' are not what we should be putting up with and 2) that men can be strong, protective, and powerful without being possessive, controlling, and generally a dick. Thanks and I will definitely check out your other work.

lovely! please continue!

Wow! This is so much better than 50 Shades (which I - an avid book lover- could not even finish). The characters are actually real. LOVE!

I loved it though I really want Dream Walkers to start again. That last paragraph of your AN was perfectly said.

Not nearly long enough, but wonderful all the same.

I feel the ending was rushed, but it was still a good story!

Yeah, smash his head in Ari!

Great Chapter! Update Soon!

Wow!

I want Arthur to kick Christian's ass after he regains conciousness and finds Ariadne.

More please! I read 50 Shades back when it was still called Master of the Universe. This is better.

YIKES! Sweet Little Ariadne wants to be dominated! Arthur is like WTF? Can't wait for the next chapter!

Update soon! And you can throw in a little A&A erotica in the next chapter if you want too, since they have that big bed. ;-)

Please continue!

I love Arthur! ::::sigh::: I have not read or plan to read the 50 shades of grey series. I read the reviews on Amazon and they were horrible. I am however reading 'Mockingjay' the last of the hunger game books. This fic seems like it's going to be way exciting!