very well written

Just discovered this. To bad you stopped there very hot

Hey My Personnal Rose !

I was checking your beta profile - I'm currently looking for a beta reader - and I'v just read this OS to have more idea about the way you write.

I don't know nothing about the universe you write about ahah (isn't it a tv show ? With Jennifer Beals ? :D). So I know nothing about the characters, but I like the way you write. In fact, I think we have similar style of writing... but I'm writing in French.

Over for this review, but with these comments, I write you in PM right now !

See you. :)
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Wow I think id like an M rated follow up! Xx

That really brightened my day. I ao needed a laugh today. Oh, and pretty sexy too ;)

Ha! This made me laugh – I loved it :-) They were so in character and cute. I do with that it was a 2 shot, but this 1 shot was quite awesome. Nice job!

This is the perfect one-shot! It would also be a rockin' two-shot (wink wink) :)

amazing

ANY CHANCE OF CHAPTER2?

I really wish this had at least once more chapter, even if it was small and quirky! Loved it! Bravo!

Love the way this story turned one of Maura's observations into Rizzles! Part II with an M rating? ;)

You capture Maura perfectly and had her doing that analytical word dance she does so well. Enjoyed seeing Jane drawn into the web and getting hung up with the possibilities of what the future could hold. This story begs for a another scene...but I am very pleased with the direction it seemed to be headed! Very well played! ;)

Oh I love it! :D Typical Maura.

... I didn't get an alert email to say you'd posted this! That sucks :( but yeah you know I love this :) I'm so glad you posted it so others can read the awesomeness :)

Ha lesbian hands, love it...