Loved it! Love your writing. I can actually see the action and places you describe. I can feel the emotions of each person. This should have been one of POI TV stories.

Wooh, secret Criminal Minds crossover, I'm totally calling it.

Great story you have such a gift. Please write more Thank you

For some reason, Joe reminded me of Fusco, right up until he sold her out, and to be honest, still a little bit now.

Oh wow, even more perfect! I loved every word! :)

That was downright brilliant. The best POI fan fiction I’ve read. The humour, the conversations, those wonderful flashbacks... perfection. Thank you so very much for sharing.

Wow... That was good, and that’s just the first chapter. It’s amazing what kind of little treasures you can find on FF net. The description doesn’t do this story justice. Thank you for sharing :-)

great story, as always. well thought-out OCs, good pace... yours are the best PoI fics here IMHO.

especially liked that little nod to Criminal Minds. ever thought about a crossover?

loved it, loved it, loved it.
Amazing story.
Thank you so much for this.
keep writing, please!

i love this fic. i love your character julie, will you be writing a sequel featuring julie and poi cast?

Another epic - loved it. Love that your fics have proper PoI plots and are really well thought out and written. Really like your OCs too.

Fantastic story! I really liked Julie...and I loved Finch's relationship with will! It was great!

Marvelous. Absolutely marvelous.

Awwww, Uncle Harold and little Will! How sweet was that! You ripped my heart into tiny pieces and made me enjoy it. That is quite a gift you've got.

This was just excellent. Your characters all shine, both those from the show and those you created for this, and the plot worked fantastically well.