Reviews for First Year: Surprises
Dragonman110 chapter 10 . 7/26/2019
I hope You decide to update the story some day soon.
deathwearsblack chapter 10 . 2/24/2019
Please let me know when you are putting your stories on Archive of Our Own.
Stormy1x2 chapter 9 . 7/24/2018
Pairing - he's eleven. Who cares? Seriously, the fic is going well enough that you don;t need to pry romance in there where it would feel forced and awkward. There has been no hints of romance to this point in ANY of the characters and that's actually pretty damn enjoyable. I love Harry's interactions with his pokemon.

Really, any romance you try to shoe-horn in based on 'what do you guys want to see' never really ends well. Don't let readers dictate what you write. I'm not interested in their opinion - I'm interested in YOURS and that's why I'm still reading this.
7019289 chapter 10 . 6/27/2018
Although I'm sad that this story is discontinued I can't wait until you finally post your newest story
Guest chapter 1 . 7/26/2017
You mistook antisocial for asocial
Antisocial is a personality disorder more often referred to as psychopathy or sociopathy.

Asocial is a dislike of interaction with other people

It's an extremely common mistake that basically everyone who's never studied psychology ( or watched a ridiculous number of psychology documentaries on YouTube ) but it's also an extremely insensitive one.

Otherwise great job I love your story concept and easy to fallow writing style and I can't wait to read more of your stories
Shelby-The-Red-Mew chapter 4 . 4/14/2017
This chappie was like "oh sheet wuts gonna happen" &I then "oh THATS what it was hahaha awesome lmao"
Dusk the Cybertronian Wolf chapter 9 . 12/5/2016
Update!
1310 chapter 9 . 4/11/2016
Waaah! More! I wanna see Harry's "Change Draco" Project! Please! Can't wait for the next chapter!
naruto kurama chapter 9 . 5/21/2015
More plz!
AliceSteves chapter 9 . 11/16/2014
I really like your story, please update soon. If they do manage to free Sirius he should move to the world of pokemon.
jeanette9a chapter 4 . 10/29/2014
It's just the right amount of creepy and the right amount of fun. it's like a trick or treat, it's chewy to eat but it's a good sweete.
Myra the Dovahkiin chapter 7 . 9/25/2014
great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting.

I think Harry/Maylene works wonderfully.
Allykrau chapter 9 . 8/17/2014
Fufufu :D loved it :3
kariza2013 chapter 9 . 6/6/2014
PLEASE WRITE MORE!
AquilineFeline chapter 9 . 4/16/2014
How big is Meki, anyway? *leans over to look at the wiki and promptly cringes* 8 feet 11 inches? That's about what I imagine the Basilisk to be! And knowing the Magical Sheeple's tendency to act-first-think-never, that would probably be a fairly unfortunate conclusion for them to draw. Do you have an idea for that? Some sort of magic size-suppression collar, maybe?
(also: Venonat3'03", Gengar4'11", Nidoran(f)1'04", Tentacool2'11", Croagunk2'04")
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