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Dragonman110 chapter 10 . 7/26/2019 I hope You decide to update the story some day soon. |
deathwearsblack chapter 10 . 2/24/2019 Please let me know when you are putting your stories on Archive of Our Own. |
Stormy1x2 chapter 9 . 7/24/2018 Pairing - he's eleven. Who cares? Seriously, the fic is going well enough that you don;t need to pry romance in there where it would feel forced and awkward. There has been no hints of romance to this point in ANY of the characters and that's actually pretty damn enjoyable. I love Harry's interactions with his pokemon. Really, any romance you try to shoe-horn in based on 'what do you guys want to see' never really ends well. Don't let readers dictate what you write. I'm not interested in their opinion - I'm interested in YOURS and that's why I'm still reading this. |
7019289 chapter 10 . 6/27/2018 Although I'm sad that this story is discontinued I can't wait until you finally post your newest story |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/26/2017 You mistook antisocial for asocial Antisocial is a personality disorder more often referred to as psychopathy or sociopathy. Asocial is a dislike of interaction with other people It's an extremely common mistake that basically everyone who's never studied psychology ( or watched a ridiculous number of psychology documentaries on YouTube ) but it's also an extremely insensitive one. Otherwise great job I love your story concept and easy to fallow writing style and I can't wait to read more of your stories |
Shelby-The-Red-Mew chapter 4 . 4/14/2017 This chappie was like "oh sheet wuts gonna happen" &I then "oh THATS what it was hahaha awesome lmao" |
Dusk the Cybertronian Wolf chapter 9 . 12/5/2016 Update! |
1310 chapter 9 . 4/11/2016 Waaah! More! I wanna see Harry's "Change Draco" Project! Please! Can't wait for the next chapter! |
naruto kurama chapter 9 . 5/21/2015 More plz! |
AliceSteves chapter 9 . 11/16/2014 I really like your story, please update soon. If they do manage to free Sirius he should move to the world of pokemon. |
jeanette9a chapter 4 . 10/29/2014 It's just the right amount of creepy and the right amount of fun. it's like a trick or treat, it's chewy to eat but it's a good sweete. |
Myra the Dovahkiin chapter 7 . 9/25/2014 great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting. I think Harry/Maylene works wonderfully. |
Allykrau chapter 9 . 8/17/2014 Fufufu :D loved it :3 |
kariza2013 chapter 9 . 6/6/2014 PLEASE WRITE MORE! |
AquilineFeline chapter 9 . 4/16/2014 How big is Meki, anyway? *leans over to look at the wiki and promptly cringes* 8 feet 11 inches? That's about what I imagine the Basilisk to be! And knowing the Magical Sheeple's tendency to act-first-think-never, that would probably be a fairly unfortunate conclusion for them to draw. Do you have an idea for that? Some sort of magic size-suppression collar, maybe? (also: Venonat3'03", Gengar4'11", Nidoran(f)1'04", Tentacool2'11", Croagunk2'04") |