Aw, this was cute. :) I wish I had an idol like Shanks. Sigh... Lol.

This was adorable. It's as simple as that. XD

One error I saw plainly: Shanks can swim. Remember? He was the one that rescued Luffy from the sea king since he couldn't swim. Just because he lost an arm doesn't mean he doesn't have two legs and another arm. Overall, it was nice.