This fan fic is in a word. Brilliant! A perfect rendition of the scene! You really get into the physic of Rumpelstiltskin and it is worded beautifully! I loved how you made it about his revenge over Belle and how it sort of spun off like a deleted scene.

Work like this from such a talented author is a gem to behold. I look forward to reading more of his Stories.

This? RULED. You are a great writer, and a great friend. Amazing work.

The interior monologue is mesmerizing- "Sympathy for the Devil" fits perfectly!

a great read. on par with your shadow stories!

Loved seeing Rum's plans for Regina!

Very creepy look into how incredibly evil Rumplestiltskin really is.