Okay I've been okay with everything up to this point. Really Derek going out on his first hunt & it's his first kill; saying it like it's normal for wolves even expected turns a bad light on all the Hales not just Peter & gives the hunters a good reason to kill all of them. It did cross my mind that Peter is just lying to get Stiles on their side so that he can kill Derek & be Alpha, but I can see Stiles believing Derek over them any day of the week.

In this story I don't care what Allison dose to try to make up for all that she's done I will never forgive her.

Great story! I hope to see it continued one day!

good!

Ok, your writing style goes above and beyond INTENSE. Excellent first chapter.

Are you ever going to update again? This is amazing! There needs to be more!

Holy shit please hurry up like where did you go?

Omg! Please continue!

You need to finish the story

I hate this story bai :)

so this story is freaking amazing! the best Sterek i have ever read, but my GOD if this doesnt have a happy ending i might die. there needs to be a happy ending, stiles needs some good in his life, no more pain. [

OMG are u saying that Derek killer stiles mother! Shit

This is the best sterek fan fic I have read in ages. I follow you as a writer. Please write more! This is amazing! :D

HOLY Sh!tballs! *flails everywhere* I cannot wait for your next chapter!

Holy Hale. They should have used this chapter in the actual show. This is amazing. And noooo! More than a couple of chapters. I love this story... Love it.

P.s. I feel exactly the same about the teacher and Derek. She needs to go somewhere. Derek needs to love Stiles.