Awesome!I hope that you can get the next chapter going soon!

I love this! I was NOT expecting Applejack to be the daughter though. One thing’s for sure: that ending with Spike and Twilight is HILARIOUS!

Please more!

ok it should have been Rainbow dash but that was unexpected... I think that is great, but she has a huge family and she obviously is a apple.

My, this is quite the fun one:-)

What all that it was apple jack she dosent resemple Celestia I am saying it is Twilight because her magical abilities and more but I almost cried

Please update

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This whole storyline is pretty muched ruined when you brought up the who "everypony is scared of celestia" thing. Its so generic an absolutely cringe worthy its not even funny. Who would think that an eternal godess who is like the mother of everyone is somehow a monster to her subjects?
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Celestia is not that naive either. She is an immortal goddes who as lived for thousands of years. She reads and experiences lives just like anypony else, only just in her level of power. Now Shes acting like she just fucked up with her boyfriend and doesnt know how to say in your right mind makes you think that only now she would have an emotional breakdown and not know what to do in a simple situation like that?

In any case you are a great author, just that celestia is waaaaay out of character. I will continue to read this story, onky to see if it leads anywhere... but please, next time don't destroy celestias personality like that, that makes me sed.

were is the las chapter shouldn t there be more ?

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APPLEJACK she has parents

You have to continue this this chapter really got my heart. Celestia trying really hard to win back her daughter aj. Now she's learning from applebloom about the farm, I would love to know what happens next please continue this story please thank you on this rollercoaster of an emotional ride bravisimo.

That was a very powerfull chapter you have done. Now Celestia is no longer Princess given up her title everything for AppleJack, this is something very eye opening for Celestia finally has a grasp what her ponies really think of her. Me and my fiancée Biggmomma46 enjoys it very well written and plotted out bravo onward.

This is a very awesome story idea. I enjoyed this, the major possibility of AJ being Celestia's daughter wow. This is something very special here I supporting you in this story by adding you and if you have the time check out my story Rays of Hope and my oneshots also my fiancée Biggmomma46 has her oneshots if you have the time and check them thank and I will continue to find out what happens next bravo onward.

Bravo! Genius! Excellent! What a story! Totally not the expected route. I love how you portray the characters, they don't feel OOC and yet you make Applejack buck Celestia in the face, no less. May I borrow (steal) some of this story's lore for my fic? Credit will go to you, of course.