To bad you abandoned this story

Like it, this is pretty good for my tatse I would recomand u to continue

I kind of like it

It's not just not bad, it's awesome! Although you say Naruto's a scumbag, you still managed o channel that badass element into him. Please update...somewhat soon.

This is looking better and better. The scene with Baki was my favorite, and I like how you alluded to his conspiring against the Kazekage via Naruto's cryptic comment comparing him to Sarutobi Asuma and his desire to test himself against him in spite of that. And implementing two obscure and lesser known bloodlines into Naruto's fighting style is always a plus in my book. I wonder what other bloodlines Orochimaru plans to impart upon Naruto? Keep up the good work, and I look forward to your next update.

A nice start. I know you needed for Orochimaru to make his escape with Naruto, and while it was well thought out, I can't help but think that Jiraiya was too easily fooled by his mud clone. A good job nonetheless.

Huh, I'm not sure what to think about this story. I'll look forward to reading more.

I'm wondering if Naruto will turn back to Konoha at some point or not. Truth...

It's really interesting so far! Please continue soon!

I like this story really want to see this progress

Interesting beginning so far. I enjoyed the bloodlines as well. Keep it up!

Good.

I'm really liking this story, I can't wait to see where it goes.

Are you planning on Naruto having a pairing? This is a really good evil (if only slightly) Naruto fic, and I was wondering if Naruto was gonna get a sadistic girl to go with him? My favorite pairing is Naruto x Tayuya, but every fic makes her this chilled out nice (er) person. If only once I would love to see this pairing and her still keeping her awesome add-kicking, son't fuck with me personality.

Are you going to update soon.

Finally. Somthing new. I'm not sure if you want the overused "good job, ryte moar plox" review or the "not bad, pretty good in my opinion. I like it."