This was freakin' perfect. I really enjoyed how it wasn't just smut (but that was great too, btw) but there's an actual story to this, as a lot of M rated fics are only about sex and whatnot. :P I like how they can be sweet, and be laughing while making love, and how he meant his compliments. It's not like in those stories where love is a game you play. Two thumbs up! Really great oneshot :)

This is one of my favorite AU's you're a fantastic writer I'd love to read more of your stories!

awesome story! that intimacy scene was off the hook! well worth my reading time!

This was amazing! I loved it!

this is beautiful, more people need to see this, i love everything about it, its got smut, fluff, angst etc all in one supercharged story

I loved it! Very nicely written, and I enjoyed the change of past and present scenes to show the progression of their relationship. Great job ;)

that was beautiful.
You're an amazing writer. :)

"She figured that was a good way as any to mark her territory, aside from peeing on him."

LOVED that line - bahaha :) I lol'd.

I love the will-they won't-they push&pull romantic relationships. Sooo steamy, and a good read. If you've got moar, I'll read it! ;)

I loved this story.
Please write more! Please!

this was BEAUTIFUL.

Perfect.

I love it all. Perfection

I love this story! In most stories they use like one paragraph, then go straight to the lemons, in yours it was like perfectly balanced!

Great story, sweet and hot at the same time. Nicely done!

So, this is kind of amazing on so many different levels. :) Your writing is beautiful and I loved the scenes you used. Seeing their relationship change was executed well and their dialogue sounds perfectly in-character, which is always nice. Korra is exactly as she should be, a ball of fire and energy and spunk but who still manages to trip over her own sense of self-worth. And Mako is so fun and debonair without even trying, which is a hard balance to strike sometimes. And, of course, the smut was impeccably done, both romantic and sexy and just so well-written I don't really even know what to say. Haha. Great job.