This is such a beautiful story. And I would entirely disregard the flamer. They just want some sort of attention and can only get it through whining and crying about how they hate the world. And a word to the wise flamer, I would find more interesting things to fill your day.

its goood

OMF I can't believe this story is complete omgg you make the best stories ever 3 I love your bumblebee x soundwave fanfics they are amazing *-*

Please do ignore what "TheFoxFace " person had story is just they don't like it they should just leave. Tbvh this is too beautiful to continue and do what you let a bastard /bitch to tell what not to do. Do your own thing. We love your story alot 3

Oh of the best thing I have read *-* so beautiful.I can't bring myself to read the Last chapter... this is too beautiful to end T.T please continue to write this T.T

"Soundwave was hiding something that didn't want to be seen" - Oh, you cunts. Soundwave isn't some sad, insecure little boy hiding behind a mask. He's a cold, ruthless motherfucker who would curb-stomp you, shovel ten feet of dirt on you, and set the forest on fire around you and not feel a thing. He's almost as cold as Shockwave, except that Soundwave has a little more emotion than he does.

Rated G for Gay. It can't get even more of a scrapheap than this.

If JenKristo is published, then I'm loathe to actually see what the cunt is capable of writing. Her roster is complete shit, and it doesn't surprise me that this was based off of a roleplay. Both Soundwave and BB are OOC, because Soundwave would have to be a retard to do the things he just did here, and Bumblebee a bigger retard for just accepting his punishment.

Oh, well. Women will be women, I suppose, no matter how disgusting they are.

I love it! But it made me cry! Do you think you'll ever write an alternate ending? Not to be pushy or any thing! But I really did love it! It's so cute and well written. I wish I could write like that! Thank you for the wonderful story!

Did I just fucking read Cybertronian gay porn?! Awesome.

Another beautiful chapter. Everything about this I love.

Holy shit. Much yes.

Aww! Bumblebee trying to make small talk. but good primus that ending though omg. *sobs to the next chapter*

Sdfghjklasdf. I love the dialouge. You (both) nailed the characters so well I can't even.

First chapter and I'm hooked. Wonderful details I am in love. /.\

uh uhnnaaAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH1!1! that is the sound of me falling off my bed in agony. (i live off happy endings)