Reviews for Teasing, mocking, smutting !
Skippy chapter 1 . 7/19
Really Fascinating Take On Alex And Birkhoff's Dynamite. But "Ohmygod. My Heart So Breaks For Sean Especially When He Told Alex The Reason He Had Chosen To Go To The Baseball Game. It Was Because It Help Him Rember His Father. But Then Say Sorry For Doing That He Doesn't Want To Mess Things Between Them. Asks For A Second Chance. Which Alex Says No. Just Such Anguish." Like When You Do Choice To Update This Story Again. If You're Choosing To Stick With The Balex Romantic Paring. Then Could You "Please Have Sean At Least Have Him End Up With Sonya." Like "Sean's A Nice ,Sweet ,Great Guy, He Deserves Happiness. And I Think A Pairing With Sean And Sonya Would Be Cute. Being They Share The Same Set Of Skills. That The Other One Likes Sean Maybe A Navy Seal But He Is Really Good With Computers Like He Could Be A Full Blown Tech Nerd If He Choose To Be. And Sonya Is A Tech Nerd. But Is Good At Being A Field Agent Good. From The Scene's I Seen Her Be Kick-Ass So I Think That They Would Be A Perfect Pairing. Also They Would Just Look Soooo Cute Together.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/16
Interesting Story, If You're Going To Continue To Running With This Story And With The " Balex Paring, If You're Could You Have Sean And Sonya Get Together. Not Just But Because
I Generally Do Think They Would Make A "Excellent Couple. Cause They Have Quality's They Really Love Like Sean's Isn't Just An Unbelievable Field Agent. He Is Also Unbelievable With Computers. And Sonya Isn't Like All The Other Tech Nerds She Has Display She Can Be "Badass. So They're Opposite Set Of Skills And They're Common Set Of Skills Make Them Such A Perfect Match As A Couple." Like It Would Be So "Freaking Cute Seeing Them Helping Each Other. With Either Computer Stuff Or The Physicality Stuff Of Being On Missions.
Frust-sheep chapter 1 . 2/25/2019
Thank god this is not a oneshot. ;D And yay you updated it this year. Anyway wonderful first chapter! :)
Guest chapter 3 . 7/6/2013
Were is the next chapters!? I can't wait to see what happens next!
Raven Mockheart chapter 3 . 3/25/2013
Well.. You know how I think about Balex but I read this just for you :p
Hm... What do I say? OH MY GOD I CANT HELP BUT IMAGINE WHAT IF SEAN CAME INTO THE TRAINING ROOM AT THAT MOMENT *rolling over the floor* HE'D BE ALL 'OHMYGOD WHAT THE FUCK IS GOING ON' *laughing so hard I have tears in my eyes*
*wipes eyes*
Heh.
Well. Had a laugh there. ;)
AllieBoo15 chapter 3 . 3/24/2013
I liked this... I liked how you finished it! But you should add more like they have a secret relationship or something like that
niafadra chapter 3 . 3/20/2013
They are so cute together, the banter is great fun to read, hope you update again soon, i am curious to see what happens next
Motionless 666 chapter 3 . 3/19/2013
Update soon love Balex make-out
Guest chapter 2 . 1/27/2013
When r u going to put the next chapter(s).
Raven Mockheart chapter 2 . 1/27/2013
and... punched him? ;)
Birkhoffs-awesomeness chapter 2 . 1/27/2013
well, thank you for your reviews...and I still don't know when I update next...but I hope it won't take me too long :)
Guest chapter 2 . 1/23/2013
When is the next chapter?!
Motionless 666 chapter 2 . 1/20/2013
amazing Balex you should continue i would love you to
Guest chapter 1 . 8/28/2012
I think you should right more. To see how they react by the kiss nd if she wants more.