Yaaaay! A happy ending!

I enjoyed this fic quite a bit - I like how you took the potential the game wasted and made a really adorable story out of it. Kudos!

Such action! :D I bet you're totally sick of my reviews by now, right?

Another enjoyable chapter!

Damn, Vega moves fast!

Interesting end you gave the Crucible thing - I like the idea of there being something more behind the Reapers and I can see how this idea has influenced your later fics. Quite cool!

What a cute family reunion :) I never thought much about James family - aside from assuming they were dead. This was a nice chapter and it was good to see James interacting with his family as a nice young man instead of with his crewmates as a solider.

And hooray for Shepard waking up!

Aaaaw! Good ol' Kaidan showing that he's not a complete jerk in the end.

I hope Shepard pulls through okay!

If only they'd let us make that choice in the game!

A really sweet chapter - lots of love and worry between Shepard and Vega. You really wrote them as a sweet couple!

Aaaw! The end of this chapter really got me - so much sweetness and love. You really caught their love for each other and Shepard's fears for the future.

I also loved how trashy you made Allers - and the comment about her dress doing her no favors made me snicker.

Beautiful moment! Shepard and James seem like the kind that would have a couple of 'near miss' kisses before they actually get there. So much flirting and so much tension. Delicious!

The recorded conversation made me soooo uncomfortable. I loved how you changed their conversation...but man, not okay Joker! Not okay!

Great chapter though! :)

I always cry when Legion dies :( I love that little guy.

I love how Shepard so badly wants James to make a move on her, it's cute. Gorgeously cute.

I love how you handled Kaidan in this - especially how Garrus and Joker recounted how everything went wrong. Their opinion of Kaidan is pretty hilariously spot on. :)

I love the Tuchanka mission in ME3 - I thought it was one of the best missions and I wished they'd done more with it. Great chapter - it's nice to see James and Shepard moving closer.

Hehe, I loved how you ended this chapter on a light note after so much heaviness! :) They had a great little moment together!

Poor Jimmy and his guilt! At least Shepard understands why he feels that way.

I'm still really enjoying how there relationship is building up so nicely and naturally.

Kaidan's behavior on Mars was always weirdly hot-cold. It was fun to shut him down and guilt trip him, but boy I would have given a lot for some more dialogue options!

Great chapter - I love how you're tying game dialogue with original dialogue. It works well.