the couple that stores their weapons together, stays together. ;)

I adore the way you write Clint...you give him so much more depth than the movies! his relationships with the other Avengers is also interesting and i especially love the way he and Tony interact. :)

Well, just read you all universe in two weeks. I really love it, the interaction between the characters and Clint growth all along the way.
I missed Dan and Todd in you last stories, as well as Phil of course (won't he come back? he does appears in the shield TV show ). I also sometimes felt like Clint relationship with Tony was a bit too much too soon, even though shared ordeals do bind men together.
But Natasha and Clint are just perfect.
Thank you very much for sharing your universe.

Okay, so I absolutely love your stories, and I am not writing this review to critique you or anything. I promise I'm only correcting you in order to help you and make your story even better.

My home language is Afrikaans, and I kind of have a peeve about seeing people butcher my language.

So I thought I'd give you the correct translations for your Afrikaans parts:

I am just a traveler: Ek is net n toeris.

What kind of traveler carries something like this?: Watter tipe toeris het so iets by hom?

I do tricks: Ek doen toertjies.

I can hit any target, well...: Ek kan enige teiken tref, wel...

almost any target: amper enige teiken

Well, any target I have a clear line of sight to and that isn't too far away: Wel, enige teiken wat in my lyn van sig, en nie te ver weg is nie.

How do you do tricks with just the arrows?: Hoe doen jy toertjies met net hierdie pyle?

Then where is your bow?: Waar is jou boog dan?

I don't carry it with me everywhere. Somebody could get hurt.: Ek dat dit nie oral saam ni. Iemand kan seerkry.

If you are just a traveler, how do you speak Afrikaans so well?: As jy dan net n toeris is, waarom kan jy Afrikaans so goed praat?

I've been travelling this country for a while and I'm good with languages: Ek het al vir n rukkie oor hierdie land gereis en ek is goed met tale.

Why we're you watching Mr. Fourie?: Waarom het jy Mnr. Fourie dopgehou?

He doesn't know anything: Hy weet niks nie.

We will let Mr. Fourie be the judge of that. But first we will teach him some manners: Ons sal Mnr. Fourie die regter daarvan laat wees. Maar ons sal hom eers n bietjie maniere leer.

And then we wil put him in the storage room untill Mr. Fourie is ready for him: En dan sal ons him in die stoorkamer los totdat Mnr. Fourie reg is for hom.

Leave us: Los ons.

I think that's all of it. Please, I implore you to change it. It's awesome to recognize my own language and country and a town I love, but to then see my home language get butchered like that?

Especially since many foreigners keep telling us our language is dying out, especially when Afrikaans is being made out to be the language of the white oppressors, to see someone actually acknowledge it is pretty awesome for me, even if it is badly translated.

So I thank you for using a bit of South Africa, a bit of Cape Town in your story. Just please, please, please correct the translations.

Totally agree with that last reviewer (Captain Kodak)... I just finished rereading all of them too and I too miss Dan and Todd. By the way, it's super nice that you have everything in chronological order on your profile, it's very helpful with keeping everything straight! I'm ruined for any other Avengers universe, including canon haha, because of you... very much looking forward to any other stories you publish in it! The summary for "Rage" especially looked interesting.

Wow... So I just finished rereading ALL of the Vantage Point Universe stories over the past four days, and I really have to say that in both Trust and this novel, I really miss Todd and Dan :( but still! You're writing remains amazing.

aren't clint and natasha the cutest little snuggle bunnies in bed? ;)

My oh my! How beautifully AMAZING this story was. Oh, how it was indeed... I would like to describe everything about this story that I loved (and along with the rest of your stories) word per wore, but honestly I don't think I'd have enough text room for it. It was so good... I don't...I don't really know what to do with myself now... Oh well. :)

Proves how ridiculously emotionally invested I am in this series that "I miss having you on the other side of my comm overwatch" reduces me to a sobbing wreck...

Here I am, back again after a short break, to continue reading and reviewing this fabulous story. Pretty sad chapter. Bit of a filler, I suppose, but it sets up the coming action in future chapters so well. I like the alternating scenes of what Clint is doing versus what the rest of the team is doing. It's so sad reading Clint's parts in this chapter. He really feels he's got nothing left. I liked the other Avengers, when they were sitting on the plane, thinking about their own loved ones and how they might react in a similar situation. You really write all of these characters amazingly well!

Their good-bye was so cute! The way you wrote Clint finding out was great! I could see it happening and feel what Clint was. Just Fury calling Clint by his first name was a great way to show just how *wrong* things were.

And your last line in this chapter...so good!

I absolutely adore the way you write Clint and Natasha! You portray their relationship so beautifully! So many great, happy moments in this, from the sparring match, to the search for Clint's boxers, to the dinner menu, to the "moving-in-together" discussion...I love it all. Having already read this story a couple times, I know things are about to get real bad, real fast, and that only makes the happy, peaceful, domestic (if you will) moments even more meaningful. Thanks for being awesome...see you in the next chapter!

This is, I think, my 3rd read-through of "Heart Bleeds," but I've never left a review for it. Thought I'd try to at least comment a couple of times this time around! Having just come off reading "Vantage Point" and "Trust," one of the first things I noticed is how much more at ease Clint is with the rest of the team. How nice to see that he's really bonding with them all! I thought you wrote the other Avengers (and Pepper!) quite well, so kudos to you on that. And I'm totally loving the Clintasha in this first chapter!

Woohoo avengers to the rescue! During the countdown to Natasha's death, I was totally like "where's the team?! They gotta be coming! Come on burst in and be Avengerly!" Lol so I was very happy they showed up. And the moment of reunion between Clint and Natasha... *sniffle sniffle* I love how you do their relationship.

Loved it! Amazing job and I'm excited to keep looking around for any other stories I've missed

I loved it of course. On to the final chapter