Please write more :3

Holy Lumping Glob! 3 this dripped with sweetness! (which I willingly licked up). It was cute and sweet. Perfect one year-avercery note! 3 I think I might cry at the cuteness! FLUFF FTW!

OMIGLOB! Sequel time!

Aww!
MOOAAARR

Aw that was really sweet

I liked the idea for this, and I find it interesting that so many people are writing stories where Bubblegum and Marcy are actually together, I've always thought of their relationship as a one sided crush type thing, but I was surprised at how much I like this.

I tend to like 'the chase', when it comes to romance more than the actual 'them being together' and that's what appeals to me about the PB/Marceline pairing, even if they were to be together, I think there would still be this sort of angsty feeling in between them because they're so different.

Anyway my point was you captured that well, and in such few words.

My only problem was some of the sentences weren't perfect, a little stiff or awkward but that was just a little sprinkling here and there, hardly a big enough problem to mention.

The story, while short, was wrapped in a dreamy type blanket, it was kind of wispy and carefree and I think you accomplished all the most important things, embodying the feel of AT in general.

OMG IT WAZ GOOD LOL U NEED TO WRITE MORE PPLLZZ