Thank you for writing this story. I loved Mass Effect and have never been ready to say goodbye. Well written stories like yours keep it alive in my imagination.

Wow just wow! I love how you pulled everything together. I was shocked at some of the people you killed off, but hell it worked! Awesome read!

I can't believe that you killed Tali. I don't see Shepard being able to save the Quarians and the Geth without her.

Just finished chapter one and was amazed how great it was. I am now ecstatic to see I have seventy odd more chapters.
Fantastic! Five start review !

You've set things up really well for the sequel. Shep injured but not letting it stop her from doing the right thing. Will she feel remorse about her uncle? Will Tash? Aria and Atheyta working together will be a formidable force. Liara missing. Cerberus will be ceaseless in their drive for power. And of course there is the small matter of the reapers. Can't wait to read more. Thanks.

Wow. Simply outstanding. I love the great depth of you story. I am excited and can hardly wait for you to take us into the next installment. Awesome job, my friend.
Sherry

Very nicely done. Emotionally heavy. Very tense. Great suspense. Can't wait for more. Awesome writing.
Waiting for part 2. It's going to be exciting to see where this story goes.

Oh that's just cruel ;)

We don't know what's happened to Liara but a determined Shep and a pissed off Aria will definitely want to find out. Looking forward to reading more of this. Thanks.

Damn it! Why did you have to stop there, WHY? I NEED to know what happened damn it! Please update soon!

I love this story. The emotion pulls me in every time. It is truly written so well. It always leaves me craving for more. Truly a very deep story.

I've come to really like Liselle. She's like Aria in so many ways but her relationships with Tash and Liara make her more likeable. Really like the meld she shared with Liara and Li telling her about how broken she once was. Thanks for the update.

Seriously. Another amazing chapter. This is such a great story. Don't stop. Keep up the awesome work

Wow, this is absolutely awesome. Emotionally captivating. I love a story that has the depth this one has, where it pulls you in and involves you. Excellent. Gonna be hard to wait for the next chapter. Sooooo, good.

Really good reading. Hopefully Liselle will make it. I love her character. I hope Tash does some damage. Great action. Keep up the good work

Another awesome chapter. Always hated Shepard having to turn herself in. And Admiral Makalovich, ugh, what a dirt bag. It was always sad in game to know that Liselle died. She sounds close to death now. I hope she will make it. Great writing. Can't wait for more.