Mistakes:
1) you accidentally refer to Mr. Potter as Mr. Evans in year II. Causes some confusion- I recommend correction.
2) this doesn't need to be corrected, but wouldn't the only girl James would have asked out in year III be one miss Lily Evans?
3) in year IV, I believe you meant to say "misadventures" rather than "misdemeanors", as the latter does not make sense in the context

That's all with the constructive criticism, I just think the story needs these fixes to be better, along with some clarification. But I love the idea!

Loved it. Very good. A lovely insight to the mysterious parents of James. Loved it.

awww I loved this it was so sweet :L xxxxx 3

very sweet!
i am always curious to learn about james's parents
but i think its charlus potter, not henry

That was frankly very cute! A short and sweet piece. Hahaha. Wouldn't mind to see the actual events playing out. Haha. :P

This is so good! I can totally imagine this!

I love this! It's great, especially the dynamic between Mr and Mrs Potter :)

I love it! I love the letter concept! Great job!

Great story! Awesome writing and the personalities are totally imaginable! Brilliant fanfic! ;)

He-he! That was good!