This was soooooo good, loved it!

Okay, really. I'm onnnnn, chapter 3 I hunk? Anyways. They should have NEVER told the Dr dude the ADDRESS. Makas smart. I'm not saying "you shouldn't have written it like that", this isn't about your writing skills, because this story is pretty dang great. I'm talking about the fact that they were stupid enough to tell this dude the address. I don't know if this dude is going to End up telling the cops, but they should be considering anyone a suspect. And this dude had no reason to have their address, he asked and they gave it to him no questions asked, so yeah, I think this guy is about to call the cops, cause I think he could have done it(for whatever reason). and is trying to cover himself up...

Wooooo!

GAH! Stupid cliffhangers!

Oooh... A dash of romance huh?.. I LOVE IT!

Yeah u go Maka!

Holy shit this is getting intense...

YAAAHHOOO BLACK STAR COMES TO SAVE THE DAY!

Chapter 12.. For some reason I think Wes and Dr. Are behind all this but idk..

I think the Doctor did it.. Also OMG YESS! When Maka opened the shower curtain I was like YASSSS!

Nuuuu... Chapter 10... Nuuuu u can't fight.. Plz make up

Yay Black Star is here... I've been wondering where the other characters were at.. Especially Black Star cuz I can always count on him for a good laugh... And death the kid with his hilarious OCD

Huh, I never imagined I'd read something like this but I'm glad I did. This was a pretty good story and I enjoyed it. Thank TV Tropes for showing me your fic.

I extent my heartfelt congrats to you for making a proper AU fanfic. It's getting harder and harder these days to find a decent one, and I believe that you have suceeded with flying colors.

Truly,

A.G.

This is one of the best stories I have ever read! I started reading it and could not stop for the whole day. Great read!