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someone chapter 5 . 9/21/2014 WHO IS THAT? |
DragonOwl chapter 24 . 5/29/2014 I loved reading this! I really liked the way you changed writing styles, it made it more interesting reading the different oneshots. I also loved how you portrayed the characters - it was amazing and exactly how is imagined them! |
Birds on the Sunset chapter 24 . 9/30/2013 These drabbles are literally too cute. You're brilliant. |
alicenotinwonderland chapter 24 . 8/21/2013 Oh this was beautiful! It was just perfect for the word and you've written every line so well. It really captured the moment and that hesitation and description made it more enjoyable. This is one of my favourites! |
alicenotinwonderland chapter 23 . 8/21/2013 Haha this was funny! I loved how natural the Marauders were and how easily they've taken to Lily. |
Haruhi-chan131 chapter 24 . 8/16/2013 Aww how nice for them to finally get together! lol but it had me laughing when he said he had urges lol :p Until next time, Haru-chan |
dance4ever95 chapter 24 . 8/16/2013 Jaw dropper cute! |
Super Cara chapter 24 . 8/16/2013 Magical. Adorable. Perfect. Amazing. Gahh. I just died from the fluff overload. |
Haruhi-chan131 chapter 23 . 8/15/2013 Haha funny chapter! And I agree! I believe they did like her better lol Until next time, Haru-chan |
Super Cara chapter 23 . 8/15/2013 I can totally see the guys liking Lily more XD |
alicenotinwonderland chapter 21 . 8/13/2013 I really loved seeing the Lily/Severus friendship! Sev knows her so well and I can see Lily being the kind of person who couldn't hate anyone. You did fine with first person. Lily's emotions were quite believable after the horrible day she was having. Nice one! |
Haruhi-chan131 chapter 21 . 8/12/2013 Aww I love moments like these when the two of them were once friends! Until next time, Haru-chan |
alicenotinwonderland chapter 20 . 8/5/2013 Ah I loved the last line! It was a nice story and a funny explanation about why James was so fond of getting Lily's attention. |
alicenotinwonderland chapter 19 . 8/3/2013 Only James could forget about his own date! The second year was so cute. I love how you write it mostly from James' POV. That confused feeling through the whole story just made it funnier. This is definitely one of my favourites from this collection! |
Super Cara chapter 19 . 8/3/2013 Cute :) |