Its me again with the fake name. SO sad. Can you make more?

I love it SOOO much i loved the first chpter so much. i hope you make more Goku x Chichi moment like on the Kintoun. Also sorry for the fake name

Omg I loved this so much. I stayed up til 3 am just to finish it:) I'm literally crying right now.

My heart was literally pounding the whole time. So good!

It is a super cute , sweet,fun and great fic !

Oh my God, I love this. It feels real and true to everyone's personalities, and I could totally see how West would think that about them... And the ending was so sweet. Great job! :')

goddam i love this goku!

Why didn't he just gave her a senzu?

Why OMG I was crying please tell me that wasn't Goku

The last line of Goku is one of the cutest thing I 've ever read!

My goodness, I absolutely loved this story. It even made me cry to the point where I had to go to an empty room so I could sit and read the rest of it without looking like a total fool. Truly one of the best I've come across, and I've read waaaaayyy too many.

Yes you wrote a WAFF and a brilliant one at that. i liked you gave it a hopeful yet realistic ending. i am even more impressed you picked the very sensitive topic of miscarriage since most GoChi fics always have Gohan in it already. Their absolute ignorance about their situation really came through and despite the tragedy, you now understand why their relationship has to grow up a lot faster. i love the honesty in this fic.

Noooo! I wanted moorreee! Last chapter so good but also so bittersweet! I would love to have a few more chapters or something about them working through this experience and then being 'back' together (like they ever weren't, lol) but better than ever.

I really loved your characterizations of everyone and thought they were practically perfect! That being said, I would love a further exploration of their character development and their growing understanding of each other and their particular brand of married life.

Thanks for a great read! Maybe one day there will be more for this one! ;)
M.C.

Oh my gosh. This. Story. Was. So. Great...I read all of it in one sitting and was left wanting more lol. When I found out Chichi had a miscarriage, it was so emotional and heartbreaking. Especially Goku's reaction, poor him :( I think it is completely fine with you updating when you feel it's ready, an amazing plot and writing like this does take time. Also, I agree that a good story or fanfiction doesn't have to include lemon or graphic sex, personally that doesn't move me as much as true and heart-to-heart scenes. I love how you brought out Goku's thoughts and feelings so well, there wasn't a time where I thought he didn't sound like how he actually is. I really hope you're going to update though and haven't given up on this story yet, it is honestly so well written :)

I love your story I think Im in love with it! please you have to update soon!